Seriously, adored the dialogue in this, grownup!Tommen and Myrcella made so much sense, and I really really loved the relationship between Trystane and Myrcella. It felt so real, arguments and endearments and all. <3
I love this! I love all of it! I love all the characterization, and the Martin-esque descriptions and eeee. I can so see this being their future! This is lovely!
I'm sorry for not replying earlier to this story, o mystery kinight author! This does by no means mean that I didn't like it - I was just distracted by fannidh news about Amazongate & ADWD spoilers and forgot to comment. :(
Indeed, I liked this story a whole lot. The characterizations are superb: While we get so little canon "screentime" with Myrcella, your fleshed-out version feels very vibrant and real, very much like an ass-kicking highborn lady who would indeed fit right into Dornish society. Speaking of which: The whole world-building / political maneouverings are extremely well-done, and this could very well be a plausible extrapolation of Myrealla's future from GRRM's canon. Last but certainly not least, it was also adorable that she was reunited with her younger brother. I'm very fond of Tommen, so I was happy that these siblings at least had a happy ending for their family.
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Seriously, adored the dialogue in this, grownup!Tommen and Myrcella made so much sense, and I really really loved the relationship between Trystane and Myrcella. It felt so real, arguments and endearments and all. <3
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Indeed, I liked this story a whole lot. The characterizations are superb: While we get so little canon "screentime" with Myrcella, your fleshed-out version feels very vibrant and real, very much like an ass-kicking highborn lady who would indeed fit right into Dornish society. Speaking of which: The whole world-building / political maneouverings are extremely well-done, and this could very well be a plausible extrapolation of Myrealla's future from GRRM's canon. Last but certainly not least, it was also adorable that she was reunited with her younger brother. I'm very fond of Tommen, so I was happy that these siblings at least had a happy ending for their family.
Thanks again! ♥
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