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fic: New Bloom, for holofernes

Dec 21, 2009 12:52

Recipient: holofernes
Title: New Bloom
Author: snowbryneich
Rating: PG
Pairing: Willas/Sansa
Word Count: 1600
Summary: Sansa blossoms in Highgarden
Warning: (if applicable) none

( New Bloom )

!fic, 2009 winter, character: willas tyrell, pairing: sansa/willas, character: sansa stark

Comments 8

misstopia December 21 2009, 19:09:12 UTC

Very sweet, nicely done with the rose symbolism and I like your characterisation of Willas: He valued dignity over desire. Sansa did seem like she'd adore Highgarden.

cloud_wolf December 21 2009, 20:05:18 UTC

Awww, I liked this. They're sweet and totally awkward, and just awwww. Very believable. I agree with misstopia that the symbolism was well done. :)

violaswamp December 22 2009, 01:33:44 UTC

I like this a lot. It's not perfect and happy right off the bat, but you can see there's potential, and the rose symbolism is well done.

spamdilemma December 25 2009, 20:48:12 UTC

Oh, I really enjoyed this, especially your Willas. It's a lovely look at stumbling toward a happy ending of sorts in the aftermath.

holofernes February 27 2010, 06:37:30 UTC

I am sorry I had not commented on this before, but I just saw it. I really, really LOVED IT. I love how you avoided mushiness and went for emotional realism. It was simple and yet so moving. I am very happy, thank you!! :)