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FIC: None Of Us Are Whole (Theon/Sansa) for snowbryneich

Dec 20, 2007 10:38

Recipient: snowbryneich
Title: None Of Us Are Whole
Author: shadow_truths
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Theon/Sansa
Word Count: 5,788
Summary: After the war, Sansa faces an arranged marriage with Theon, and the two of them must reach some common ground.
Warnings: Some pregnancy and breast-feeding fantasizing.

( None Of Us Are Whole )

pairing: theon/sansa, !fic, 2007 winter, character: theon greyjoy, character: sansa stark

Comments 21

matitablu December 20 2007, 18:25:21 UTC

Mmmh, this is... cute and disturbing at the same time, is it possible? Cute because both Sansa and Theon - as the title says - are awkward in their own way, and changed from their younger selves... You truly end up rooting for their relationship. On the other hand, the whole "is Sansa a maiden or not", left there hanging, casts a dark shadow on whatever might have happened to her during the war. Good job!

shadow_truths December 30 2007, 01:14:58 UTC

Thank you! I wanted to leave the Sansa trauma open-ended, because there are just so many possibilities, and I figured people could fill in their own details. Glad you enjoyed it :)

etrangere December 20 2007, 18:54:25 UTC

Great story, this is very well written. You write Sansa's bad memory in a compelling way, and both Theon and Sansa are interesting as their future self.

shadow_truths December 30 2007, 01:15:25 UTC

Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it.

zoeiona December 20 2007, 21:20:32 UTC

This is fantastic! Hot and compelling at the same time. Great, great stuff.

shadow_truths December 30 2007, 01:15:40 UTC

Thanks kindly! I'm glad you liked it :)

redcandle17 December 21 2007, 17:38:09 UTC

This is absolutely perfect. Seriously, I love everything about it. I love how Theon has grown up, but it's Sansa that really makes this fic. I love the way she thinks about the harsh lessons she learned and words cannot express how much I love the fact that she thinks how Cersei would handle it when Theon mentions that he may not be faithful. And I love the sense that this a relationship that can work, the sense of hope.

And of course the Sansa/Sandor references and the Asha/Theon hints are icing on the cake. My mind went straight to an Asha/Theon/Sansa gutter.

shadow_truths December 30 2007, 01:16:05 UTC

Hee, that's a nice gutter! I'd go there ;)

And I'm really pleased you liked it. Thanks!

misstopia December 21 2007, 18:58:32 UTC

Oh my holy mother of pearl that is hot. Damn. The characterization was superb, bravo.

shadow_truths December 30 2007, 01:16:14 UTC

Thanks very much! :)