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asnowyowl

The Summer Al Tried to Live. Chapter 7/10

Jul 22, 2009 09:21

Since I was so late with the chapter this week, I made sure to get it done in plenty of time this week. A bit of a shorter chapter.

Author: asnowyowl
Title: The Summer Al Began Tried to Live: Chapter 7
Pairing: Albus Severus/Scorpius
Summary: In the summer before college, Al Potter finally begins living, but can he find the courage to show his family who ( Read more... )

summer 'verse, as/s, nc17, as/s summer 'verse, fic

Comments 22

bk7brokemybrain July 22 2009, 13:49:21 UTC

Oh, yay! Oral! lol I love that Al is still unaccustomed to being welcome to another's body. He didn't even grasp Corey's hair. So awkward and sweet! And the way they just stood there spoke of inexperience, too. It seemed illicit and naughty ( ... )

asnowyowl July 23 2009, 10:30:57 UTC

First Laddy LOL. I love that.

I've seen so many teenagers fall in and out of love in RL. One week they say they'll be together forever (after only being 'together' for a very short time), the next week they're breaking up. I wonder if that's more of a rural phenomenon or if it's like that in urban areas, too. *shrugs*

I don't think Corey realizes how deeply his family history could affect his future in politics. He's still so young and innocent in the ways of the wide world.

thanks so much,hun!

bk7brokemybrain July 23 2009, 15:04:08 UTC

I think most teens are like that. Present company excepted, I think.

nolagal July 22 2009, 14:15:32 UTC

I love the urgency of the new relationship where it's all Al is thinking about and he's always with Corey. They're so cute together and Al's first blowjob was adorable.
So fabulous!

asnowyowl July 23 2009, 10:32:50 UTC

Thank you! I'm trying to remember what it was like at that age to be dating someone seriously for the first time. It seems it could take up most of your life for a while, at least.

How was azkatraz??

nolagal July 23 2009, 11:52:39 UTC

So very fabulous! I met way too many wonderful people and had a blast! I wish you could've been there too.

remuslives23 July 22 2009, 14:19:41 UTC

Aw, so sweet! I loved the slightly awkward, but enthusiastic blow jobs and the talk of the future... *squees* I do sense bad things on the horizon for them - Cho's daughter could spell trouble for Harry...

asnowyowl July 23 2009, 10:34:46 UTC

Thanks, hun. Alas, it can't all be smooth roads. *sigh*

accioslash July 22 2009, 16:00:19 UTC

Oh, an early post! Yay! I liked that Rosie stopped to remind Al that he has other friends. Balancing that new romance with making time for old friends is something so few people manage to do well at any age.

I liked the backstory on Draco and was interested to see homophobia from Vanessa. A bit disappointed that people assume Percy will be such a douchebag. But then, I have a bit of a soft spot for him and tend to think he's viewed unfairly.

asnowyowl July 23 2009, 10:37:04 UTC

Thanks! So many people do tend to let a new romance become the center of their world, to the detriment of their other relationships.

Percy in this is definitely straight-laced and the butt of a few jokes, but I don't plan on making him a horrible person. He's just not all that understood by his more laid-back family members.

beatnikspinster July 22 2009, 17:41:03 UTC

Their relationship is so sweet! I love finally hearing about Corey's father. That's a good non-magical equivalent. I also enjoyed Al and Rose working out their friendship around the relationships. I'm looking forward to the Potter family dinner.

asnowyowl July 23 2009, 10:37:53 UTC

thank you! I think Al will probably be the most uncomfortable person at the Potter dinner. *nods*