The Summer Al Tried to Live--Chapter 2

[asnowyowl]

Author: asnowyowl
Title: The Summer Al Began Tried to Live: Chapter 2
Pairing: Eventual Albus Severus/Scorpius
Summary: In the summer before college, Al Potter finally begins living, but can he find the courage to show his family who he really is? In this chapter Al tells Rose and calls Corey.
Warnings: Still none
Rating: This chapter: PG13 (eventual NC17

Comments

[bk7brokemybrain]

I still love this world and these boys. Al is all kinds of nervous, yet brave, and Scorpius isn't just a pretty face being loud and out - he's active for his rights. I really feel for Al yearning for something so badly, but being so conflicted and afraid. You really nailed his fidgeting. *loves*
I see all kinds of conflict and hotness down the pike a piece.
Love the way you worked in your prompts. "Something Irish. Stew, I think." LOL.
LOL at Harry's Taurus. The closest thing to having a Ford Patronus or something. Ha!
I hate that I have to wait for these chapters. Time is not my friend, nor is patience. *g*

[asnowyowl]

Thanks hun! I almost get anxious myself when I'm writing this Al angsting. I find myself wanting to pet him.

Yep, there will be both conflict and hotness down the road.

[la_dissonance]

Curses on Malfoy, for bringing up coming out so soon! They could've at least hung out a little bit before he started making Al make promises, goodness. I hope Al's family will be more accepting than he expects, though! Can't wait for the date. :D

[asnowyowl]

Thanks! Corey's been burned before by in-the-closet boyfriends, he's not so willing to try that again.

[la_dissonance]

Understandable, but still - his approach leaves something to be desired in the tact department! LOL

[asnowyowl]

LOL. Yes it does. He's a bit of an outspoken boy (the kind that might just run roughshod over poor Al)

[accioslash]

Oh, I was waiting for this. Not sure how I feel about Harry and Lily the elder, but I love everybody else. The relationship between Al and Rose is really intriguing. And I love Vince here.

I like that Corey brought up the question of being out. He's obviously someone who isn't going to be able to keep a relationship hidden. Plus, I think he's a good judge of character. Even though Al himself isn't sure he was telling the truth about coming out if the relationship gets serious, I think Corey has had enough experience to know which men will follow through and which won't. Al seems like he has too much integrity (though that could just be me projecting Harry's personality into the boy who resembles him) not to keep his word.

*waits impatiently for part three* ;D

[asnowyowl]

Sorry for replying to this so late! I lost track.

Yes, Corey knows who he is and he's not going to hide it from the world, and he knows he doesn't want a relationship he needs to hide, either.

I'm having a lot of fun playing with these characters in a non-magic setting.

Thanks so much for reading!

[brissygirl]

I'm loving this Ann! Corey needs to work on his tact a little bit, where Al is concerned. I can understand where he is coming from, having been burnt before. Poor Al nearly having a panic attack during his phone call with Corey was too cute!

Harry thinking Al was trying it on with Rose was pretty funny, and assuming that Al was happy because of a girl he had the hots for. Lily snr seems really caring and non-judgemental.

Is Al out of School yet or does he just know alot about computers?

[asnowyowl]

Yay for loving it! This one's pretty special to me as I adore non magic AU fics.

Corey is a bit blunt, but he doesn't mean it in a mean way, he just doesn't want to waste his time on someone who won't be willing to give a relationship a real go.

You'll see in the next chapters that Al is just getting ready to graduate high school and move on to college.
Thanks for reading!

[quixyjie]

Still cute and amazing. Haha and I love Vince!