Okay, I was asked twice about stuff that happens in this fic, so here it is. I think I've posted bits and pieces of this before in comments, idk, most people probably didn't see them
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lol Half the village is up in their business. XD I quite liked the outsider perspective of this. The 'oh shit' feel works well. I'd love to know what Kakashi and them were thinking, though. XD
*Squeals.* I remember this! Or, at least the parts that have been put up before :D
Very nicely done with Ikusa’s POV. I’ve always been interested in what was happening while those three were occupied, lol, ‘cause I remember that Naruto was being watched. And I really like Ikusa’s character, you showing through her how preexisting prejudices can completely skew someone’s perceptions.
J'aime beaucoup le point de vue extérieur, ça remet un peu en perspective le 'oh shit kyubii is having babies' ! Je suis toujours vachement impressionnée par la profondeur que tu donnes à tes OCs en quelques lignes ^^
Ohhh~! *w* I loved this outside perspective!! All those caution measures and spying, so neat and organized, I expected nothing less from a shinobi village! (At first I read 'Ikusa' as 'Iruka' and couldn't get why you used female pronouns, but hehehe if he ever witnessed that scene he would faint on the spot.) ...and now I kind of want to read 'The Night' again. @_@
Oh, this was lovely. It has this delicious thread of fear and paranoia through the whole thing that made it so very honest. This is what Naruto will always face ... 'cause Kyuubi really is in there. It's a shame Naruto can't see it from this POV. They're not right but oh, I bet his night walks and puberty have made things even scarier.
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Very nicely done with Ikusa’s POV. I’ve always been interested in what was happening while those three were occupied, lol, ‘cause I remember that Naruto was being watched. And I really like Ikusa’s character, you showing through her how preexisting prejudices can completely skew someone’s perceptions.
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J'aime beaucoup le point de vue extérieur, ça remet un peu en perspective le 'oh shit kyubii is having babies' ! Je suis toujours vachement impressionnée par la profondeur que tu donnes à tes OCs en quelques lignes ^^
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All those caution measures and spying, so neat and organized, I expected nothing less from a shinobi village!
(At first I read 'Ikusa' as 'Iruka' and couldn't get why you used female pronouns, but hehehe if he ever witnessed that scene he would faint on the spot.)
...and now I kind of want to read 'The Night' again. @_@
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Very nice!!
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