I Thought I Just Saw A Ghost (2/?)

Dec 13, 2010 14:07

Title: I Thought I Just Saw A Ghost (2/?)
Author: asirnay
Pairing: Callie/Arizona, Mark/Lexie, Arizona/Teddy (friendship), Callie/Mark (friendship)
Rating: PG-13
Summary: What happened after the end of episode 7.10

Chapter 1
Chapter 2 )

grey's anatomy, mark sloan, phil stark, arizona robbins, alex karev, callie torres

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almicah December 13 2010, 19:57:59 UTC
Wow Arizona has some balls, I really hope she yells at Stark in the show too.

And I'm glad you filled in the gaps from the promo :) (I think she's saying that she slept with Mark by the look on Arizona's face)

I can't wait for more :)

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asirnay December 14 2010, 18:54:26 UTC
I was kind of worried that I didn't have Arizona come down on Stark hard enough. But I guess it was sufficient. And I also thought that Arizona's reaction in the promo was from Callie telling her about sleeping with Mark. It had to have been on Arizona's mind since Callie was staying with him.

Thanks for reading.

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burningeden December 14 2010, 00:03:59 UTC
You!!!

YOU!!!!

I adore you, P!

And I adore this story. It's so in character. Absolutely every word uttered here is dialogue that I can envision on the show. I love how excited Alex was to have Arizona back. It shows how much Alex has grown and how determined he is to be in pediatrics. I also love Arizona's speech to Stark. Oh, how she got his number down. I can't stand him. He's just an ass. I hope he gets a good firing.

I also LOVED the response from Mark about Callie telling Arizona. That was SO Mark.

I cannot wait to see where you go with this. It's brilliant. Like always, your writing is flawless.

Thanks for sharing it.

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asirnay December 14 2010, 19:14:25 UTC
-As I read over the dialogue, I could imagine Sara, Jessica, Eric and Justin saying those lines.
-I've always liked Peter MacNicol, but I hate Stark. He was immediately set up for us not like him. I don't know how they'll handle him on the show now that Arizona's back, but I have a few ideas of my own.
-Mark will be Mark. You can always count on him to bring the funny.

Thanks for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed it. That means a lot to me...

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merderlove December 14 2010, 11:29:50 UTC
wow wow wow! super! i'm stuck here. please, write more :))
i love the way you write

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asirnay December 14 2010, 19:14:57 UTC
Thank you. More is on the way...

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ttandme69 December 14 2010, 23:55:59 UTC
great chapter...tough to see the heartbreak of Az... I love Peter Nichols as the Biscuit on Ally McBeal and I must say, I am not liking his character on this one! Kick him to the curb Richard!!! Thanks for the update...eagerly awaiting the next chapter. thanks, Lisa

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