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Kryptonite (1/1)

May 15, 2010 07:31

Title: Kryptonite (1/1)
Author: asirnay
Pairing: Callie/Arizona
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Callie and Arizona try to cope being apart after the elevator kiss.

( She always did this to me. Calliope. She always got me to break every single last unwritten rule that I stored away in my head. )

grey's anatomy, mark sloan, cristina yang, arizona robbins, teddy altman, callie torres

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stargazer89 May 15 2010, 12:49:46 UTC

i love how Cristina went and got tissues and just put them on her lap and didnt say anything, very Cristina =P

asirnay May 17 2010, 16:53:15 UTC

She probably wouldn't admit it, but I think deep down, Cristina really cares about Callie. And vice versa.

stargazer89 May 17 2010, 17:02:23 UTC

Definately. ever since Cristina asked Callie to be a bridesmaid when she was marrying Burke, you can tell that they've become really close and both care about each other but you're probably right - Cristina's not going to be admiting that any time soon =P

asirnay May 17 2010, 17:48:53 UTC

Oh yeah, I forgot about the bridesmaid thing. Cristina leaned on Callie a little bit since she was the only one out of the bunch that was married at the time. The scenes when Callie got drafted by Mama Burke and Cristina's mother and when Izzie found out she was a bridesmaid where hilarious...

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asirnay May 17 2010, 18:01:50 UTC

Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading...

noacparker May 15 2010, 13:18:27 UTC

Nice. I like how you captured their tones, as they do have very different speech patterns, and that's well-reflected.

asirnay May 17 2010, 18:06:47 UTC

Thank you. I hate it when I see a TV show or a movie or read a book and everyone talks exactly the same...

tonksylupin May 15 2010, 17:01:43 UTC

Awww, sooo sweet! *__*
You portrayed perfectly Arizona's feelings, and Callie's scene with Mark and Cristina was... Brilliant!
Really good job! ^_^

asirnay May 17 2010, 18:10:03 UTC

Mark and Cristina took care of Callie when Erica left her. I wanted to see that again on the show. Of course, Mark was there for her. But, Cristina was all wrapped in her own drama with Owen, Teddy and Meredith. Thanks for reading...

walking_weapon May 15 2010, 18:56:03 UTC

That was really good. Sad yet somehow hopeful too. Very much what I think would have happened after that kiss. Love the title.

asirnay May 17 2010, 18:19:14 UTC

Thanks. Coming up with a good title can be agrivating sometimes. I had a different one in mind. And the out of the blue, "Kryptonite" just came to me. This storyline is indeed sad. But definitely hopefully at the same time.

walking_weapon May 17 2010, 20:31:11 UTC

Oh for sure. I hate when I have this really great story but no clue what to call it :P Kryptonite totally works for this fic and for them because that's what they are to each other. Callie is all badass and Arizona is all perky, and they keep those fronts up for the world really well, then they get around each other and bam!