Till Death: Revolutions

Nov 17, 2006 17:54

and so I've hit 21500 words in Till Death, a little less than eight thousand over the TP version of the story. Its been interesting, since I've basically been creating a new mythology and working on the characterization of the various people who've made appearences. In addition to fleshing out the Judge's role in the netherworld, and the ( Read more... )

renee evangel, the metamorphosis

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opt513 November 18 2006, 01:34:48 UTC
The distinction between exposition and infodump is one that I'm still learning...

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asimovforever1 November 18 2006, 04:53:13 UTC
The way I've been working around it is by having the characters describe their own life stories, and in the process explain how things work or where things are located. Since Renee doesn't really now much, they do explain things to her.

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opt513 November 18 2006, 07:24:32 UTC
Nice touch. I tend to end up adding context to characters' thoughts, and that's nothing if not the entrance to an endless loop.

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No. Not off-topic at all... >.> vorkon December 25 2006, 08:43:27 UTC
It occurs to me that I don't seem to have your email address. I'm sure I've had it in the past, but I can't seem to find it.

But either way, I wanted to wish you a merry Christmas, and I figured you probably had LJ replies emailed to you, so this was better than nothing.

I know it's pretty much just a bastardization of the winter Solstice, but that's never mattered much to me. The way I look at it, every holiday out there is nothing but an arbitrary excuse its practitioners make to celebrate and have a good time. There's nothing inherently better about any day than any other, after all. But you know what? I don't see anything wrong with that. so this is my arbitrary chance to wish you a good day!

That's all for now, I guess. I've been really lousy at keeping in touch with people out here, this time around. Business, laziness, and a lousy connection will do that to ya. But either way, have a good one!

---Brian

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Re: No. Not off-topic at all... >.> asimovforever1 December 25 2006, 12:24:17 UTC
Even if you did have my email addy, it changed about 6 months ago so it wouldn't work anyway. the new addy is azziekun@bellsouth.net.

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