Fic: Cargo, Ch. 1

[asidian]

Pairing: Ulki/Janaff

Rating: PG

Warnings: Er. Rating likely to go up.

Summary: A poorly timed surveillance mission lands Janaff on a ship carrying exactly the sort of merchandise his king had feared:

Comments

[r_amythest]

Yeeep. Bishie abuser, you.

... I must say, that is one helluva storm. But, okay. ^^

If the plot is what I think it is, it's original to the FE section (except maybe that one Atarasii fic which was never continued), although variants have been done with other plot devices in other sections. Can't say much, though. I expect I'd have more to comment on in the next few installments~

[asidian]

..yeeah. I fought with myself over the storm. Then I figured, dammit, if they can take that much damage from wind magic, I'm at least exploiting the weakness for fic purposes. ^^;;;

*solemnly acknowledges the bishie abuser title* ^^

HATES YOU!!!

[beanclam]

God. Dammit. You just couldn't wait, could you? You just -had- to start writing this fic... I thought that maybe you'd wait til the end of the month to start on some angst. But nooooo. >_< Gah... *prepares for approaching angst/torture*

If I hadn't already promised to show you the UlkixJanaff pics, I would totally withhold them from you.

Poor Janaaaaff!!! ;_;

Re: HATES YOU!!!

[asidian]

Eheheh. Sorry? I'll, uhm. Make sure Ulki makes it better at the end? ^^;;;;

[moontyger]

Hmm, interesting. I admit, I'm not entirely sure where you are going with this, but I look forward to finding out!

[asidian]

Oh, good. At least my terribly transparent plot idea isn't evident to everyone. :D

[chaoslace]

...My goodness. Poor Janaff indeed. And I assure you that this fic will spin out of control much like the tempest that swallowed your fair protagonist. Five parts? Hah! It laughs at five parts! It's just getting warmed up!

Hurt/comfort is like those little capsules you buy and throw into a sink full of water. And then boom! Little sponge dinosaurs all over your sink!

...It's only a matter of time.

Anyway. Does it need to be said that I'm anxiously awaiting the next part of this? Beautiful and absorbing as usual (I really enjoyed the descriptions of the sea). Hooray for birdfic!

[asidian]

....this may be the best quote, ever: "Hurt/comfort is like those little capsules you buy and throw into a sink full of water. And then boom! Little sponge dinosaurs all over your sink!"

If someone put that on a shirt, I would have three of them, just so I'd never have to take it off. :D

*hurt/comfort is her guilty pleasure*

[chaoslace]

...Dude, I too would wear that shirt. *waves hurt/comfort flag*

*stares at your icon* That is truly profound. It's like a zen koan, where the answer is Soren looking stern.

[asidian]

*makes note to go digging through other fics of yours, looking for hurt/comfort* ^__^

I dunno that it's quite that profound. XD

[angevar]

*digging through old fanfics she hasn't let herself read yet*

Not too terribly transparent... but yeah. *smirky* Nice... very nice... even if a little see-through. And you make a good point to r_amythest, wind magic can do damage, storm can too.

*slinks off to next ch.*

[asidian]

*snrk* Hey, I never said the set-up wasn't a blatant excuse for me to write the fic. ^_^;