Comments | asidian: Fic: Chill of Morning

asidian

Fic: Chill of Morning

Feb 13, 2006 06:52

Pairing: Ike/Soren

Rating: PG

Warnings: Angst...?

Summary: ( The war is taking its toll, and it's the little changes that hurt most. )

Comments 8

r_amythest February 13 2006, 16:42:42 UTC

Oooh, shiny! *cuddles the fic*

It's slightly evident that the course of this fic changes a few times throughout, but while there is slightly less unity, it does make it a very authentic train-of-thought narration, and the style unifies it enough.

Of all types of endings, I had never really considered anything like the kind you gave this fic: then, he reached carefully for the pen still clutched loosely in fingers lax with sleep. But for some reason, it feels perfectly conclusive. Why is beyond me, all I know is that it sounds fitting, and that was a nice place to cut off, feeling very peaceful-ish.

That, and the events in the fic are *so* sweet. *lovelovelove*

asidian February 14 2006, 09:03:59 UTC

Gah! *loved* ^__^

I'm really glad to hear that it came together at least a bit; in the end, though, I had to go back and spackle over the transitions cause I kept bugging myself that they didn't unify well enough. It's still very loose, but I think I can stop picking at it, now. ^_^

And the end... it was strange. Just like the fic started itself, it decided that it wasn't going to keep going any further than right there. All in all, it's been quite pushy. ^^;;

moontyger February 14 2006, 07:13:23 UTC

Very nice and sweet! I like it!

asidian February 14 2006, 09:04:26 UTC

*grin* Glad you liked... thank you! ^_^

beanclam February 15 2006, 04:43:18 UTC

AT first I was like... "angst warning? Noooo!!! It has begun!"

But it wasn't really angsty... It was nice. And sleeping/exhausted Ike made me awww. I'll enjoy the angst-lessness while I can... I'm dreading the inevitable Soren torture. Damn you. >_

asidian February 15 2006, 05:32:26 UTC

Now, now. There's no need to go throwing around needless accusations. I've been good so far, haven't I? ^_^;

Besides... there won't be a question mark after the 'angst' when I get to the heavier stuff. ^__^

tip_not_tippy February 15 2006, 05:01:15 UTC

D0oooo000000d. I was waiting for a Daein Ike/Soren. My anticipation couldn't have been better met. YOU WIN. D:

...And this fic makes me wish I lived where it snowed. Darn ol' sunny So Cal.

asidian February 15 2006, 05:34:01 UTC

*griin* Yay! You liked! I as a bit hesitant about writing Daein!Ike/Soren (hadn't planned on it when I started the fic, actually), but I'm glad to hear it came out. ^__^