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Oct 26, 2006 21:55

Here, there is no light.

Here, there is no color to the walls or floor: just a uniform, ashy black.

Here, there is nothing -- no proof of what has come before, no prediction of what may come after.

There's only the darkness, the cold, and the long hallway stretching ahead.

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grimy_brian November 13 2006, 22:47:18 UTC
So where there were people there's space. And where there was space there's all this - like - wall. Ashy black house wall, nothing like the outside of school playgrounds, nothing like that bit down behind the Manor he said they'd never get caught but something -

It's 3 o'clock, and we ask ourselves
'where are we now?'

- something about the weird expectant feeling in his stomach is kind of familiar and kind of... like he's gonna get caught at something.

'it seems we've wondered out of bounds again'

And getting caught at something was never worth it if - if it wasn't Them, if it wasn't -

"...Adam?"

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ashtreelane November 15 2006, 00:38:53 UTC
The word hangs in the air, shivering
down
the
length
of
the
hall.

Nobody answers.

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grimy_brian November 18 2006, 09:30:54 UTC
One hand on the wall.

One hand on the wall and one reaching up to clench around the edge of a Hat 'cos that way nothing can -

the wall shouldn't be this reassuring 'cos it's dark and he's got no clue where he is and there's no one here (it's not unfamiliar) and the echoes kinda freak him out but he starts walking anyway.

It's cool and dark like underground and that's never been his - underground is good. Underground and ash-black and no splintered wood and no endless stairs down and no -

Something far away, something deep in the (how can a) house (be this big?) rumbles.

(Sounds like the

c   r   e   a   k

of the attic trapdoor)

Brian  slows   to    a     halt.

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ashtreelane November 21 2006, 18:53:27 UTC


my shadow pinned against a sweating wall

There is nothing here but him.

That place among the rocks--is it a cave,

Nothing at all.

Or winding path? The edge is what I have.

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grimy_brian November 21 2006, 19:15:02 UTC
Which... okay. Okay. All is good and all is right with the world and maybe he just needs to quit with the wacky baccy, right?
Deep inside
I'm on my own and I can't see straight
It's not so bad. It's not so bad when it's quiet, 'cos he's not so weirded out by being alone any more. Kinda faded as he got older, kinda faded as the whole Them thing faded, kinda faded.

Dark, though.
deep inside
am I so stoned that I can't see straight?

Which he can deal with. He can deal with this. He doesn't need anyone else to deal with it for him because that is not how the real world works, Brian.

Which means, maybe, he should start walking.
Man, I've got to find my way back home
but I'm too deep inside

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ashtreelane November 21 2006, 19:31:26 UTC
Sure. Start walking.

that's not the way out

Pick a direction.

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grimy_brian November 21 2006, 19:44:08 UTC
Brian starts walking.

Stops again.

Takes a second to rummage through his pockets.

One (1) bouncy ball
One (1) fluorescent pink figure of Polo, warrior lord of the Universe
One (1) snickers bar
Half (1/2) pack of chewing gum
One (1) tippex pen, pretty crudded up
One (1) conker
Seven (7) rizlas, one small pouch of baccy, and one smaller pouch of - yeah.

(It's tempting. It's hugely tempting. But there're more important things, right now.)

Brian takes the tippex pen and draws an arrow on the wall.

Starts walking.

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ashtreelane November 21 2006, 19:54:19 UTC

Ahead of him, the hallway stretches out interminably.

home, child o mine
the man walkin home

.ylbanimretni tuo sehcterts yawllah eht ,mih dniheB

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grimy_brian November 21 2006, 20:01:35 UTC
The echoes

don't quite

work right, here.

Brian stops whistling 'pink elephants on parade' pretty damned quickly.

He thinks about maybe taking his fingers away from the wall - they're starting to ache with the cold - but you don't do that. Don't lose your way in the labyrinth, don't look back.

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ashtreelane November 21 2006, 20:12:32 UTC
And does the wall
r
  i
    p
  p
l
  e

slightly under his hand, just for a moment, like the twitching hide of some huge

(elephant)

beast?

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grimy_brian November 21 2006, 20:21:02 UTC
"Oh, shit."

And Brian's voice is kinda distressed, and kinda sickly amused, and kinda scared somewhere in there, too.

(Doesn't take his hand away from the wall.)

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ashtreelane November 21 2006, 20:23:57 UTC


It's so cold.

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grimy_brian November 30 2006, 18:48:44 UTC
Brian folds his hands up inside his hoodie. The cold bleeds through the material but he feels a lot less like he's gonna lose a part of himself.

(
He takes a look back, along the

l
o
n
g

c
o
r
r
i
d
o
r

and can't see the faint glint of white anywhere. Maybe. Maybe he's been walking longer than he thought, maybe. Must be. He remembers drawing, remembers it, memory fresh and clean in his head and Adam's not here
)

He gets out the tippex again, draws another arrow on the wall. Lines not so straight, this time.

(his hands are cold)

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ashtreelane November 30 2006, 18:54:17 UTC


a
             r
T h e          r
            o
        w

isn't there anymore, when he glances back.

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grimy_brian November 30 2006, 19:03:56 UTC
"Oh."

Smaller voice.

Younger.

He's. He's 'most certain he drew an arrow. But maybe he - stands to reason arrows don't just disappear when they choose. Maybe he -

("But it seems to me everyone's goin' to be a lot happier if they forget about this. Not actually forget, just not remember exactly.")

"Shit."

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ashtreelane November 30 2006, 19:09:33 UTC
The echo comes back blurred, diminished:

"Shht."

"shh."
"shh."

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