When Devils Speak the Truth - chapter six

[ashtakra]

Title: When Devils Speak the Truth
Fandom: Smallville
Guest Characters: Johnny, Ben and Susan from Fantastic Four; Sheppard, Lorne and McKay from Stargate Atlantis.
Characters: As many of them as possible, from as many other fandoms as I can manage and still keep track. 
Genre: Future Fic, AU, slash, whumpage abounds
Pairings: Clark/Oliver, rest are

Comments

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OMG OMG OMG! I just ... I didn't even ... I was ... I'm SPEECHLESS! I didn't see that coming at all. My head is spinning. That was a major twist, you sneaky sneaky person!

You're killing me with this story. It's one major twist after another and I'm eating it up.

I'm so excited! Ollie has been there the entire time.

Thanks for the background ... I was worried you may take offense but I just meant it as a suggestion! :D

Thanks for the update too! Can't wait to see what you come up with next!

[ashtakra]

No, no offense. Writing is a process and not one that should be done in a vacuum. I always appreciate feedback, good and bad. I am so glad I left you speechless, "Ollie has been there the entire time" indeed, but why... stay tuned.

[boltgirl426]

HOLY COW!! That was just awesome ... I never expected that twist at all but it was completely brilliant! Such a fantastic job ... I'm so glad you started updating again ... terrific!!!

[ashtakra]

I enjoyed writing that twist so much, pretty much had it written before the last two chapters but Oliver will soon explain why he waited so long, kind of need to take a breath though, so please be patient - damn work keeps using up all my time.

Fantastic

[anonymous]

Again, that was fantastic. I kind of guessed the real identity of Robby when Clark started pondering about his parentage. It made me want to read the whole series from the start again. :) It meant that Oliver was around Clark coupled with Johnny. How did Oliver resist not revealing it all!
MME

Re: Fantastic

[ashtakra]

"Thumbs up" you got my hints! Also yes, that will be an interesting conversation, you can just imagine Oliver, "So...Johnny huh?" I know I have to work it in there but have not quite decided how he should react. The positive reponse is great, thank you so much.

[souless_misses]

OMG *heart attack* how awesome, Ollie was there, it' was Ollie, ack! finally the reunion we've all been waiting for. Very awesome story and brilliant chapter.

Be Reading You.