Title: Gaze on Oblivion
Pairing: Merlin/Arthur
Rating: MA
Warning: Dark themes, character death, pre-slash
Summary: Being two sides of the same coin means they can never look at the same place, without consequences.
Word Count: 4445approx, a little long but worth it (I hope)
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I love this. You capture the relationship between Arthur and Merlin really well, and I like Merlin and Morgana working together. The description of Merlin's magic was really powerful and yes, Merlin would change the outcome of this situation, even if it means his own death.
The end? No, this cannot be the end! Merlin is lying in his blood with a crossbow bolt in his chest, but you did not write that he was dead... yet... *is hopeful*
I'd like to see more from you (even if it is Arthur mourning his friend).
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*sniff*
Sequel? Please?
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Great job.
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oh no no no no no!
you've got to keep writing! it can't end here!! oh kill us too why don't ya?
please write more? please?? this is sooooo good!!!
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