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Ficathon Entry for the_girl_20

May 20, 2007 20:54

Title: Birthday blues
Author: kjaneway
Written for: the_girl_20
Prompt: Birthday
Word count: ca. 1600
Author's notes: Time constraints have left this piece unbetad and unproofed. I'd like to apologise for that, at this point. Also, I may have been projecting just a touch.

( Ash didn't bother with birthdays any more )

ficathon07, fan fiction

Comments 23

yukivampyra May 21 2007, 16:17:01 UTC

Aww..this was lovely.

kjaneway May 21 2007, 16:56:15 UTC

Thanks!

mondoshawan555 May 21 2007, 19:53:05 UTC

Great to have a look at the history. Lovely story :-)

kjaneway May 21 2007, 22:17:46 UTC

Lovely story

Thanks.

spazticscrat164 May 22 2007, 03:01:32 UTC

Aw, that was quite wonderful. I needed a good bit of sweet-sappiness to ease the daily tension before bed, and this was perfect.

I adore the way you used their first names towards the ends as their relationship really shifted.

loridragus May 22 2007, 04:47:34 UTC

This was very sweet. Loved it.

debonisa May 22 2007, 04:50:13 UTC

Aw this was so romantic! I loved the background on Ash and Scribbs first meeting and I loved the kiss! The girl was right, this had a very fairytale feeling! Good job!

Love,

Amy