Ficathon entry for lysachan

[ralst]

Title: Missed Opportunity?
Author: ralst
Written for: lysachan
Prompt: Ash has a problem, something only Scribbs can help her with. (I went on a bit of a tangent)
Word count: 1359

Comments

[the_girl_20]

I love Scribbs' vitriolic thoughts towards this slapper who attempted to steal Ash away from her.

Scribbs just didn't have the patience to hold a grudge, let alone win a staring contest. - Hee! However, caving in to the puppy-dog eyes isn't anything to be ashamed of. It'd be a hard-hearted person who could resist Scribbs in puppy-dog mode.

First kiss in a loo. How strangely Ash/Scribbs.

[ralst]

I think the slapper was lucky she didn't get anywhere with Ash, otherwise Scribbs might have done her serious damange. You've gotta love those feisty women.

[ralst]

I finally had to give up on the words yesterday but fortunately a few dropped into my lap this mornining. But the next time I sign up for a ficathon, remind me not to leave it to the last minute.

[kjaneway]

I love this.

...followed by a forty minute lecture on police procedurals and the promotion prospects for women within the service.

Oh so *very* Ash.

[ralst]

I think she may have used slides.

[yukivampyra]

This was awesome
Now it wasn't the most romantic of settings and the bruise on Scribbs' forehead would make any photo of the event look decidedly odd,
I especially liked that part. :)

[mondoshawan555]

That was sweet, loved it :-)
It never fails to impress me how someone can write something like this and in such a short time