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Ficathon entry for lenina101: Guilty until proven innocent

May 20, 2007 11:10

NOTE: I am posting this for lysachan because she is on holiday at the moment and won't be back for a couple of weeks.

Title: Guilty Until Proven Innocent
Author: lysachan
Written for: lenina101
Prompt: One of them is accused of murder
Rating: PG
Word count: 4,793

( The fic )

ficathon07, fan fiction

Comments 9

crimsonwhisper May 21 2007, 18:50:35 UTC

Great fic,I love how Ash was all super Ash to the rescue hehe. It was so cute when she got all flustered. The hug was funny and cute.

Ash to the rescue... lenina101 May 22 2007, 21:53:46 UTC

Nicely done.

I loved the fact that Scribbs plays on Ash's mind at night and how she needs Scribbs to reflect her thoughts when solving a case. Vulnerable Scribbs was very cute.

debonisa May 25 2007, 04:31:34 UTC

Oh that was an amazing story! You did a fine job mapping out a case and wonderful ending!

Love,

Amy

magicmumu July 15 2008, 20:20:27 UTC

I really liked how Scribbs called Ash because she knew she would get her out of the sticky situation. I sort of wish you went a little more into the motive and why they chose Scribbs of all people or maybe just saw the opperatunity. Or maybe I missed that. Still, I loved this fic. Good job.

Erin