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You Are My Light (Chapter 6)

Jul 16, 2011 14:11

Title: You Are My Light
Rating: PG-13
Summary: During the first day of shooting, Ian and Anthony try to show some affection to each other without getting caught by anyone, especially Mitchell. It was a fun little game until one of them falls into his trap.
A/N: Hello loves! Here's the next chapter of my story that you guys have been waiting for. Tell ( Read more... )

fanfic, smosh

Comments 34

vespiquen8 July 16 2011, 19:49:15 UTC

Omg, of cause you just HAD to put a cliff hanger, lolz. can't wait for the next chapter! ^.^

ashley_marie811 July 17 2011, 02:57:03 UTC

Haha, I know. It's difficult but it slowly builds up the suspense of the story! (Plus I love seeing readers' reactions to my cliff hangers teehee xD) Thanks for reading, lovely!

smoshme2 July 16 2011, 20:25:22 UTC

OMG! Ian can't do that! And Anthony can't either! They're supposed to be together!! GEEZUS! I really want to know what's gonna happen! Don't let us wait too long!! This was greaaaat BTW! (-:

ashley_marie811 July 17 2011, 02:59:06 UTC

Haha! I'll do my best to satisfy your desires! ;D Thanks for reading beautiful!

ext_692739 July 16 2011, 23:08:07 UTC

Another Firetrucking Cliffhanger hahahahaha. I need the next chapter hahahahahaha. This story is great

ashley_marie811 July 17 2011, 03:01:14 UTC

Thanks yo! & yes, cliffhangers hurt me just as it hurts you XD

ext_692739 July 18 2011, 23:45:55 UTC

I love this story so much i want more asap LOL your writing is amazing and your imagination for the story blows my mind how you think of all this

ashley_marie811 July 19 2011, 05:10:04 UTC

Well, thank you so much for reading bro! I dunno, it's interesting how I come up with the plot. But seeing a lot of awesome people, who are fans of Smosh, enjoying this story I came up with, THAT blows my mind! :D I'm not even this good at writing in school either, but when it comes to fanfics, I feel like an author xD

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smoshyruth July 16 2011, 23:36:02 UTC

Freakin awesome!Cant wait to read another chapter!;)

ashley_marie811 July 17 2011, 03:02:04 UTC

Thank you for reading lovely! <3

smoshyruth July 17 2011, 13:57:46 UTC

And thank you for writing this amazing story :p

bewarethepen July 17 2011, 01:44:51 UTC

Ahhhhh! Can I kill Mitch? PWEASE!!!!! Okay so a dang cliffhanger, Ahhh you might make me go insane.

ext_692739 July 17 2011, 02:31:17 UTC

Agreed Mitch is evil. Poor Ian :( But Anthony is a Bitch for dirty dancing that chick. And Mitch fucking drugged Ian or something douche bage

ashley_marie811 July 17 2011, 03:04:40 UTC

I'm pretty sure I made a lot of you go insane after the cliffhanger LOL XD Haha, at this point, I'd want to kill Mitchell, too. I'll do my best to get the next chapter up soon!