Comments | ashkevran: Story: "...Please..." Part 3 of 3

ashkevran

Story: "...Please..." Part 3 of 3

Dec 10, 2010 15:20

Special thanks to Nancy for the "Hutch with pierced ear" idea that inspired this story. Thanks also to the SHareCon S&H veterans who encouraged writing in general and slash in particular.

More thanks to Tiber and shadow for the beta and the "coaching" and reality checking and all the other stuff.

Comments always welcome!

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starsky & hutch, fanfiction

Comments 6

anonymous December 10 2010, 22:32:15 UTC

Ohhh, I didn't expect a part 3!!!! Another hot-fevered scene that leaves me barely breathing!! But my favourite part has to be the ending, how Starsky manages to make Hutch admit his doubts, how Starsky is the prize and how Hutch thinks he has to play it safe... Beautiful...! Again, a great piece of writing Angel! I also really love the descriptive parts in your story. You should turn professional !
From FB Blue xxx

ashkevran December 11 2010, 15:19:51 UTC

Blue! Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I will send you a FB message too. There were 3 different endings before I finally made my choice - the original one, the one someone encouraged me to write, and the one included in the story to bring it full circle. It really is a love story, with some sex thrown in. I am so glad it worked for you. xxx

-Angel

nancys_soul December 10 2010, 23:46:20 UTC

Bravo Angel! Loved the ending and that Hutch got it in the end!LOL! But really, this was so well written, you are really good at this describing thing, wow! I am impressed. I'm with Fb above, I like that he finally gets Hutch to realize that he plays for keep and forever! Loved it.

ashkevran December 11 2010, 15:21:06 UTC

Thank you Nancy - I am very pleased to hear you liked the story and the ending. Another bite at the apple, asking and hopefully answering - "Is there anything harder than Hutch's head when it comes to believing in love?" His Starsky loves him. Thanks again for the idea and for reading. :-)

anonymous December 17 2010, 18:02:45 UTC

you done good.now write the next one we talked about./T/s

ashkevran December 17 2010, 23:04:50 UTC

Thanks Big T & thanks to shadow too.

Story outlined and it will be fun! :-)

We've come a long strange way since law school...haven't we?

Come around more often over here!

Hugs to 2 of my favorite hot guys-

-Angel