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[ashirabe]

So today was the NWOC Art Show, where my school and seven others in our conference come together to showcase our art and win prizes.

My self portrait won Honorable Mention and my ceramic sculpted heart won SECOND PLACE.

:DDDDDDDD

Also, here: I wrote this yesterday for this exercise in Story Writing, and I liked it enough to post and toss it into the

Comments

[bacchae23]

Interesting little story. You've created a character that certainly seems more than a little curious, and side characters, too, that fill in their roles as jack-ass coworkers well.

My only complaint? Your narration is very, very good except when you jump into the speech of your characters "spinach was 'is name, wasin' it?". I understand what you're trying to do, but it seems out of place with the earlier, more formal diction you had going. If you keep it in there, you might want to put quotes or italics on it as to help the reader understand that the language is like speech snatched from the characters' mouths.

Otherwise? Awesome possum. Good job. :)