Trigger

[ashesof_hope]

Title : Trigger Chapter 8
Pairing : RyoUchi
Rating : PG-15
Genre : Crime, drama
Summary: Nishikido Ryo was a disillusioned investigator in the Tokyo Major Crimes Division, filled with self-hatred and regret for not being able to save his sister. Uchi Hiroki was a journalist looking for a scoop. A macabre crime by a killer with a personal vengeance soon

Comments

[diac]

you scared me...I loved the bathroom scene it's like classical horror movie really scary with the way you describe Uchi's emotions. Blood on Uchi's bed aaaaaaaa poor Ryo will have to stay overnight...for protection,　right? XDD

Somehow I managed not to comment to the previous chapter. The beginning is very beautifully written from nightmare to nightmare LOVE IT and the description of the park - very nice one.

It’s soooo nice to see your updates, princess chuchuchuuuu I hope you will write more <3333

[ashesof_hope]

There's only one thing in ur head! XDDD Ahem, what, I totally didn't plan on that. *shifty eyes* XDD You probably forgot to comment. Funny u're commenting in batch now. Urgh, I hope I write more. I'm losing confidence in my writing DDD:

[diac]

*hides* but these shifty eyes give me hoooope XDDDDD

please please write more!!! and stop with bullshit abt your writing skills! you are one of the best and I'm never gonna be tired to remind you that. <33333

[ashkt]

ahaha u're scolding me! Boooo again. One of the best? What u mean I'm not the best? XDDDD

[fayevalentine3]

This day is too good to be true! :)

I never forget about Trigger. Ever. I'm just so happy you updated! *O*

I loved the inversion of roles and I loved all the suspense in the bathroom scene. My heart was racing as if I was there myself! Scary... I love it. I can't wait for more... can't wait to know what Uchi is close to find out that is making the criminal so nervous... and I don't know if that reply to a comment above is going to be included in the next chapter but... I can't wait to read how they're going to spend the rest of the night... since both are unable to sleep! XDDD

Ahhh. What a great day this was. Uchi + Ordinary + Trigger. I feel spoiled. <333

[ashkt]

:))) Oh u read the comment. XDDD I do plan to put that in the next chapter, I just haven't figured out what comes after that. Sex or sleeping. XDDD And yeap Ordinary is all kinds of wonderful really. Thanks for not forgetting this fic.

[raviolikenshin]

HELL NO I didn't forget! I'm so excited you updated! This chapter was really creepy o.o

I look forward to more!

[ashkt]

lol it was supposed to be creepy in a way. Thanks for reading :))

[blufox_o7]

You.. you updated. Omg. You updated. Everybody's being nice this week. Maybe they're preparing me for the next weeks of terror -.-

BUT DANG. I... I can't get enough of this.

Best line for this chap: "And quite frankly I wish I didn’t see you at every crime scene I’m going to."

Update sooonnnnnn ♥

[ashkt]

hope the next few weeks of terror aren't so bad for u. Thanks for commenting :)

[closetchild_]

I dunno if I have ever commented before, I remember reading the first few chapters and totally loving the fic, but then I dunno what happened 'cause I only got around to read the rest now o_O;

Anyways! This fic is so so so awesome! And interesting! And captivating! And I must say, the way you write is just skfjdksfgsh I LOVE IT XD;

There are tons of things I could quote and such here, but as I just read everything since the beginning all on once I can't really remember it all, besides this comment is running long already. BUT, but.. The bathroom scene in the beginning of this was really thrilling o____o And the way the plot develops and the little bits and thoughts from the criminal and the way Ryo and Hiroki can't seem to avoid each other and how their relationship grows more and more interesting and man ♥

Damn why am I suck a sucker for all these twister R/U fics >>; must not be healthy I HOPE YOU'LL UPDATE SOON AGAIN ♥

Oh and I loved that little hotel room scene extra!! ;~;

[ashkt]

glad u like twisted RU fics since.....I seem to like writing them. XDDD Oh...u read that hotel room snippet I wrote. I'm still figuring out what actually happens next but thank u for liking the development of the story. Oh I　dun intend for Ryo & Uchi to avoid each other for very long. XDD

Thanks for commenting

[closetchild_]

Well it's a good combination then! XD;

Oh I　dun intend for Ryo & Uchi to avoid each other for very long. XDD

Well that's good to hear! :D
Can't wait to read more~! ♥