Heh. Love the idea. Especially the girls' conversation before things went sour, and Dean as one of Faith's passing ships. *thumbs up* Loved the hint that he was her first link to the supernatural, too, even if she never knew that.
Yeah i really wanted to use that scene and extend it and use it to show Faith's past. I do normally write NC-17 sex scenes, but didn't feel that it was really needed in this one at all. Especially because it was more from Faith's pov.
I tried to show her spunky self, but still with the shyness anyone would have the first time, even Faith. I was a little worried people will think 15 was too young, BUT Faith is a very sexual person, and i actually see 15 as being almost too old for her.
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I'm all for giving little hints into my stories, i find it pretty funny that Dean could have been her first foray into the supernatural,
You notice how she isn't scared of the gun?
Faith was Slayer from the start. :P Even before the calling.
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This was nicely done. I can see Faith and Buffy walking along on patrol and talking about guys. It's canon. They did so. You used it to great effect.
Faith's vulnerablility did show itself here, and the liason with Dean was in the realms of possibility.
I liked how you worked the sex scene, a shy 15 year old and a more experienced young man sharing a special moment. Less is more.
I loved it
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I tried to show her spunky self, but still with the shyness anyone would have the first time, even Faith. I was a little worried people will think 15 was too young, BUT Faith is a very sexual person, and i actually see 15 as being almost too old for her.
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