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waysmeanstonola in ashen_wings

Dulling the Senses (drabble)

Apr 25, 2006 19:40

Title- Dulling the Senses
Author- waysmeanstonola
Rating- PG 13 (for language)
Disclaimer- Written for fun, not meaning in anyway to infringe on anyone's copyrights. Please don't sue me.

( Hell always left a bad taste in his mouth. )

Comments 5

truwest April 26 2006, 05:47:46 UTC

Really nice piece. Evocative. thanks for sharing!

elys84 April 26 2006, 07:03:03 UTC

!!ashljkhf!!!!!!!!

OMG AWESOME :)

waysmeanstonola April 27 2006, 00:12:57 UTC

thanks! *blush* :)

cupiscent April 26 2006, 07:37:27 UTC

Wow. You wanna throw some more into a coupla hundred words? That's bursting at the seams and just... yeah. wow. It's so very him, because he is that full, isn't he? And everything's that hard and sharp and sardonic and pointed. Just grand. My only quibble is that it is only that short, and hotdamn I want more.

waysmeanstonola April 27 2006, 00:12:22 UTC

See, this is my problem when it comes to writing fan fic- I'll have these rich, wonderful little vignettes, but when it comes to turning them into a full-length fic, I can't figure out how to go from one to the other.

However, since summer holidays start in less than two weeks, I might try my hand at expanding this into something longer.