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ashbear02

Brick by Brick part 1

Mar 02, 2010 19:49

Title: Brick by Brick 1/?
Fandom: NCIS
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1751
Warnings: major angst
Authors Note: ok, so about a month ago I wrote Reactions, which was an angsty little number about Tony seeing Gibbs kiss The ELB. I had more than one person ask for a follow up to "fix it". So...I wrote and I erased...and I wrote it again....and ended up erasing ( Read more... )

gibbs/tony, ncis, brick by brick

Comments 32

lyndasty March 3 2010, 01:08:25 UTC

OMG!!! Angst-o-rama!!! I LOVE IT! And now I hate the ELB ever so much more...and I didn't think that was possible.

ashbear02 March 3 2010, 05:05:11 UTC

xD Yay~! I'm glad you love it. And I'm pretty sure my feelings about the ELB can be accurately summed up with the statement "KILL IT WITH FIRE!"

>_> Not that I feel strongly about it or anything.

jencrisscolfer March 3 2010, 01:14:17 UTC

Wow that was intense.

I feel with Tony. I want to hug him and give Gibbs a good kick in the ass AND a headslap for good measure.

How could he do that to Tony? Poor baby.

I´m looking forward to the next chapter...hopefully soon.

ashbear02 March 3 2010, 05:10:50 UTC

Gibbs is having a issues at the moment. He will be dealing with that.

It will be soon, I'm already writing it and I like what I'm doing. =] Should be up tomorrowish if i'm lucky.

marmillady March 3 2010, 01:38:22 UTC

Oooooh!! Love it so far - more more more soon!!!

ashbear02 March 3 2010, 05:11:30 UTC

Oh, Thanks~! I'm happy you're enjoying it. There will be more, and soon. ;] working on it now.

mistress_tien March 3 2010, 02:56:28 UTC

First: THANKS! I'm so happy you're going to fix "this".

Second: You have a great feel for these characters and I love how you are using them. I love that Ducky is ticked off at Gibbs and is trying to take care of DiNozzo. I love Fornell laughing at Gibbs and telling him he does nothing half-assed. Perfection!

Third: As much as I know Tony is hurting, I'm glad you didn't focus on his pain. You'll have plenty of time to do that as time goes on and Jethro needed to be kicked in the ass this chapter.

Lovely, lovely, lovely! Thanks for sharing.

ashbear02 March 3 2010, 05:14:23 UTC

First: Thank you! =] I'm so happy you're reading it.

Second: Thank you again~! It awesome to know that you like how I'm writing them.

Third: I agree wholeheartedly, you'll get to see a lot of Tony's pain because I didn't want to give this an easy fix.

And again, Thanks for commenting. =3

angst_queen_98 March 3 2010, 03:04:49 UTC

Ouch doesn't even begin to touch the pain here. Wow. Part of me can't help but wonder if Gibbs didn't turn to the evil bitch because he KNEW he was in deep with Tony and it scared the piss out of him. I'd *almost* feel sorry for him except that the depth of hurt he has shoveled onto Tony is such that some folks never really recover from. :-( I adore that it's Tobias who makes him see the light! "You left DiNozzo for that?" Pretty much my reaction too.

Shame on you, Jethro. You'll be damned lucky if Tony takes you back! Damned lucky he's still working for you. *hugs Tony*

You mentioned more? Soon, maybe??? :)

ashbear02 March 3 2010, 05:22:36 UTC

;] Can't say yet; but yes. Tobias was convenient to go "wtf are you doing?" And Tony....is too Tony to leave the job, can't make any promises about taking Gibbs back though.

There will be more, and it will be soon. =3