Comments | ashbear02: My Bell Chapter 5

ashbear02

My Bell Chapter 5

Nov 17, 2009 18:06

( Gibbs had a love/hate relationship with bourbon... )

my belle

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ghfan_98 November 18 2009, 02:48:36 UTC

I've enjoyed what I've read so far. Looking forward to additional chapters.

ashbear02 November 18 2009, 04:00:12 UTC

Thank you~! =D

ravensrookery November 18 2009, 02:58:58 UTC

I hope that more chapters are posted soon. I just have two teeny tiny things that you may want to change. 1. In chapter one you mention Kate, then in chapter four you mention Ziva. 2. Did you purposely change Anthony into Antony? If so, it's your fic and your perogative. I think your fic is really good so far and I am looking forward to reading more soon.

ashbear02 November 18 2009, 03:59:06 UTC

The Kate slip up has been fixed, sorry about that. And yeah, I changed the spelling of his name. o_0; To be honest I have no real reason why,but I've always spelled it that way in my head. So I just ran with it. o__0 I really am just that random.

Thanks~! ^__^ More shall be up asap.

kitrina23 November 18 2009, 03:45:48 UTC

This is a wonderful story. Hope you write more soon. :)

ashbear02 November 18 2009, 04:01:37 UTC

More will be up asap~! I'm glad you liked it~!

sabinbc November 18 2009, 04:08:31 UTC

Enjoyed this. Looking forward to more soon.

marie72 November 18 2009, 04:10:52 UTC

well done...can't wait for more...