Roadblock, Chapter One

[tartanboxers]

Rated: R
Summary: Ron and Hermione travel to Australia to find her parents, but encounter a few obstacles. May contain spoilers for DH!

Comments

[ancarett]

Poor Ron -- a terrifying plane ride with the turbulence AND the Spice Girls. (I loved how Hermione brought her charmed book along, too, and the spat over the checked wands.)

Lovely and believable moments in the hotel room -- you wrote the young lovers in a way that was fun and true to character.

But, eek! Where have Hermione's parents gotten themselves off to?

[laurel_potter]

...and the Spice Girls can have them back now.

LOLOLOL

That was a wonderful beginning, and I can't wait to read more!

[loriel_eris]

Oh no! You can't do that! They can't be gone! Although, on the up side, if they're gone, that implies a longer story. *g*

Can't wait to see where this goes. :)

[samanthacr]

This is good!! Ron and the aeroplane is just too funny!!

Patiently waiting for the next chapter!!

[ladymaidmarian]

Poor Ron :(

She better make it up to him!

Yes, I meant to say HER!

(crawling back into my hole)

[tartanboxers]

Wait, I'm confused. What does she have to make up to him? Ron's the one who lost control at a crucial point...

[ladymaidmarian]

She makes him nervous, why else. Poor guy had to think and lord knows they can't think and do 'that' at the same time. Besides, who else would I blame :P.