Prompt 1o - Roses

Sep 01, 2007 13:54

For the Casual Writer @ in_vazn

1o. Roses
DBSG (Jaejoong x Changmin)
For yumeyana, just because.

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theresa_lynne September 1 2007, 06:10:20 UTC
But... who died? What's going on? I need to re-read all these all over again. XD

I like how they all tie in together, though. <3333

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asfireburns September 1 2007, 06:18:20 UTC
Bwahahahaha, as far as I know, it's just DBSG minus one. I don't really dare want to say if it's anyone, 'cause I really want to write the points of view of everyone should DongBang become a four-man group.

>>;; Why does everyone think someone has died? xDDDDD Then again, why does the idea come across so clearly? xDDD

Waaah, I'm so sorry for the vagueness of it all m(u_u)m I really really need to improve on my writing... >_<

Hahahaha, I guess it's just a weird universe where there's only four of them from five povs? But thanks so much♥♥♥

I'm so energized to write again now--!!! >u

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theresa_lynne September 1 2007, 06:28:26 UTC
Hahaha... XD Well this: his first loss of a loved one so close, made me think "Death". And you know, Changmin being so upset and collapsing and all that stuff.

I mean, I'd be upset if my BFF moved away, but I wouldn't be THAT torn. Hmm. I dunno. LOL.

Tell me nowwwwwwwww. XD

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aswindblows September 1 2007, 10:18:53 UTC
^_______________^

I wouldn't know ^^;; *zomgantisocialpsychooo* But I guess that's true hahahahah xDD

Hm... Should I tweak it to make it more vague? :3

They take turns dying! *SHOT*

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sharkbait_ha September 1 2007, 06:14:09 UTC
poor min ;_;

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aswindblows September 1 2007, 10:19:44 UTC
the more we hurt, the more we love~

it's my way of showing who my favourite is. xD

*gunned down by min fangirls*

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onew September 1 2007, 08:26:41 UTC

ah, ma-chan. jaemin. sooo good. :D
your writing style is wonderful, honey. so don't worry. :D (my writing style's weird, really. xD)

and all Jaejoong wants to do is take that fire and extinguish it between his palms, and watch Changmin smile again.
♥ i want to fly to s'pore and tackle you right now!! xD

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aswindblows September 2 2007, 03:18:56 UTC
MY ATONEMENT!!

:DDD

*thwap* What weird?? Ang ganda nga basahin e~~ Malinis, at alam mo talaga kung anong nangyayari♥

*tackled, anyway* <333

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enchanted1312 September 1 2007, 11:11:26 UTC
i didn't want to know who died really. ^^ though i think it's yunho cause i didn't want to see yoosu broken up which i think is selfish of me. hehe. but my heart broke to see changmin being so weak and so emotionally unstable because of this. aah, good old angst! >_

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aswindblows September 2 2007, 03:21:46 UTC
I want to write angst that makes people happy~~~

...*SHOTBRICKEDANDMAULED*

xD

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enchanted1312 September 2 2007, 03:23:39 UTC
don't worry, angst always make me happy. ^^

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munkeemajick September 1 2007, 17:33:52 UTC
iunno. i was getting the feeling that it was jae who died ><
But then from this little chappie makes me think otherwise, esp the end, where he CALLS the managers. I thought he was watching over Min as a spirit or something. And the Jaeho part - made me totally believe it was Jae because their conversation was entirely in italics. Plus, whenever you write Jae's character, it seems a bit distant. >< i'm so confused lol. I've been reading the chappies over and over trying to figure this out.

For a while, i thought it was that Jae completely detached himself from the band but everyone's suffering a bit too much for him to just have left.

i REALLY love this little mini-series thing that you have here :) it's really awesome. you should write more! lol.

~Elle

PS - I'm completely convinced it's Jae and i'm trying to figure out how he called the managers lol.

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aswindblows September 2 2007, 03:27:37 UTC
Ah. I can't seem to write Jae properly... u_u *fail* He always comes across so distant, hm. I guess he does come across as really separated from everyone in this. :3

*FLAIL* I NEED TO WRITE CLEARER NEXT TIMEEEE!!! *heddeck*

Thank you so much!!! That's really making me want to write some more ~~♥



P.S.
Not only that, he manages to bake cake and make breakfast :DDD

P.P.S.
Jae's supaaa psychic. He haunts his managers through white noise in the phone.
Jae: *frizzfrizz* GIVE. *staticstatic* VACATION!! *frizzcrackledeadline*
Manager: oO;;; *starts cancelling schedules*

...:D

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munkeemajick September 2 2007, 03:46:52 UTC
Wait, so you're saying that Jae didn't die?!??!

Lmaoooo. your PPS made me crack up like hell XDDDDD. I watched white noise. Let me just say, I'm not a fan of horror movies. I get too interested by trailers and during the movie but then I freak myself out afterwards. >< But seriously, I can imagine Jae taking care of the others while in his grave XDD. He'll dig out of the ground and bake cake and make breakfast at like 3 AM and leave before the others wake up/come back from work.

Iunno, and then I thought it was like Yoochun but then he did a couple of non-dead things >< And it couldn't be Junsu or Yunho because they were all lovey dovey and talking about the one that passed away.

Psh. i think you're just trying to trick us all with your summary!!!!!!!!!!! you're driving me crazy trying to figure out who died.

So it's minnie?!??!?! AHHHH!!! >runs around screaming her head off< i'm so confused!!!! did he get sick from pushing himself too hard and then died?

But then!!! he watches as Min goes through this, his first loss of a ( ... )

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munkeemajick September 2 2007, 03:48:18 UTC
Psh. I just read your reply to the comment under mine >< So you DOOO rotate the dead one ><

I still ♥ you :)) <--- double chin action!!!!

~Elle

P.S.
I get a little hyper at night :))

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