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[ficlet] [oneshot] Meltdown

Aug 20, 2008 21:49

Title: Meltdown
Fandom: X
Characters/Pairings: Kamui, Yuzuriha, Karen, Kusanagi
Genre: Angst
Words: 574
Notes: I wrote this a while ago, but never posted it anywhere. But if my Milestones series is about healing, this one is... decidedly not. ^^;; Post-series.

( Suddenly, everything snapped back into vibrant color, and all he saw was red. )

fandom: x, oneshot, ficlet

Comments 6

sakanagi August 21 2008, 02:14:41 UTC

Ouch. That was well-written, and I can really picture those events happening. Nice work!

emudii August 21 2008, 02:37:56 UTC

OMG. WAH. FUUUUUUUUUUUUMAAAAAAAAAAA. ;o;

(...I thought you said you were doing Milestones? Oh wait, you did. And this. I totally walked in on this expecting fluff. YOU MURDER MY SOUL.)

I ♥ you.

luminaire August 21 2008, 03:35:53 UTC

Owwww. The third-to-last paragraph really hit me hard. A very powerful little ficlet, great job.

sophiap August 21 2008, 10:35:11 UTC

Oh, this is deliciously painful, and so well-written.

ilcocoabean August 22 2008, 15:13:00 UTC

Oh that hurt to read. Wonderfully written nonetheless.