Disappearance of Denmark Ch. 5

[aseies]

Title: Disappearance of Denmark
Author: ASEies (AmeUmi36@Deviantart)
Rating: T (there are slightly mature scenes in later chapters)
Characters: (main) Norway, Iceland, Finland, Sweden, Denmark, (secondary) OC!Greenland, England, Prussia
Couples: Denmark/Norway, Sweden/Finland, Hinted Greenland/Iceland, Hinted England/China
Warnings: Angst,

Comments

[glassamilk]

And the plot thickens!

I really like that Greenland is involved. Normally, I'm not a huge fan of OCs, but I'm always weirdly eager to see what people do with Greenland and I must say, I'm quite fond of yours. I like that he's so deadpan and has this whole air of mystery around him-- it's a nice little nudge that he has a relation to Norway.

And Denmark. Oooh, Denmark, you fool, what have you gotten yourself into? I really, really like that you've described him as being tired... Denmark really is a very old country with a pretty bloody past, so I think tired is definitely a good way to put it. It almost feels like giving up, if that makes sense? Anyhow, I'm looking forward to the reunion! Especially where Iceland is concerned, since he doesn't remember him.

Keep up the good work!

[aseies]

God it always makes me freak out when you reply to me ;u; It doesn't matter if it's of a comment or this...

Haha well I can't really take credit for this Greenland. He's silens_muse's. I've worked with this Greenland for a long time, and I love being able to share him with other people.

Haha it was just something I slipped in instinctively, but my personal Denmark (silens_muse) also pointed out that line as good.

And he is tired. He's tired of fighting, of hurting, and being alone and rejected. Exactly like giving up.

As for Iceland, I'm not sure how you'll feel about that reunion, but I won't spoil anything. xD;;

Thank you. ;u; I will~

[glassamilk]

warlglgrbrll you're adorable. *A*

Well, credit or not, I like the way you write him! Greenland has a very interesting history and enough mythological superstition to fill a lake with, so there is such great potential to develop a character. (I've always wanted to, but I don't even know where to start. OTL) You and your friend have done a fabulous job!

[aseies]

haha ;u; Friends? Did not have the same conversation with Syupon earlier

Haha besides the fact I love our Greenland to death, he was the only one I could think of Denmark turning to for this sort of thing. England would have just tried to talk some sense into him.

I've read a few Greenlandic fairytales before and magic was a pretty common thing with them. xD Plus they were downright interesting. Putting corpses and bones together and put in a spirit of revenge? Who thinks of that sort of stuff. The culture is so different from our own, it's sad that the people are so depressed. D|

Thank you. ;u; Your words mean a lot!

[scheska]

Aaaahh~ Yesss, Greenland (who reminds me a lot of Sweden xD)i love you... im feeling so much relieved now that i know Denmark is alive somewhere :D

But oh, my poor Denmark D:... i want to know what is he doing of his now-human life o.o

[aseies]

hm I guess he does seem a bit like Sweden. *shrug* I can't properly defend him, because he's not my character, but I'll say that Greenland is actually a lot more simple-minded than Sweden. Like, in an RP once, Greenland heard that Iceland was sick because he needed more money, and Greenland gave him a stack of pelts. xD He's pretty absent-minded too, but headstrong at the same time. Not always the best combination. xD

Don't worry, you'll find out all about his human life in the coming chapters. =)

[petenshi_hime]

Danmark is...human? O^O W-wha-but! Duhhhhhh?

CHANGE HIM BACK! HE NEEDS HIS BEST BUDDY!!!!

[aseies]

All in good time, my friend. *strokes pretend beard*

[nickyliicious]

*O* It's Greeeenland!!! I loved the character! I like more a female Greenland but just Green-kun is awesome! If Peter could get an appearance and even a human name, why the biggest island on the earth can't?

This is getting more interesting!!! I can't wait to see what's happening next! MONDAY, PLEASE COME SOON!

THIRD TIME'S A CHARM.

[aseies]

Haha ah well. xD Greenland isn't even a country. :c He needs some screentime too! Unless he's not Inuit. In that case, just forget him.

Thank you! (but actually, I need to do a serious overhaul on the next chapter. Monday needs to wait for a while. ;;)

/will still upload it on time though, no worries!

'kay then... Next Chapter, Next Chapter, Next Chapter!

[nickyliicious]

But it's an AUTONOMOUS region! That makes him more awesome than a mere simple country! xDD

okay... *sits in a corner to wait.*

... hoshit that's pretty clever.

[aseies]

Yes! Just as soon as Denmark stops needing to give him an allowance he can be his own country. xD

Don't worry, I'm making progress. |D