you'll take your steps away with hesitance

[jacyevans]

Title: you'll take your steps away with hesitance
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Sam, Dean
Word Count: 1,975
Summary: Sam doesn't talk about Ava; this is so far from normal Sam behavior, Dean wonders if he should circle back to the Blue Rose Motel and check under the beds for pods.
A/N: Written for summer_sam_love. Title from "Cautioners" by Jimmy Eat World.

Comments

[faye_dartmouth]

I like this--it has a very authentic feel and rings true with where the boys were at this point. I miss the little brother moments on the show, so it's nice to see it in fic :)

[trinaaron]

Great job. While I really love seasons 4 and 5 of the show, I do miss the brothers actually talking about things and noticing when something is wrong.

[ramoniciu]

I really enjoyed reading it.

[sendintheklowns]

"No, it's okay, I'll get the bags," Dean mutters, tossing his bag and the weapons duffel onto his bed from the doorway.

I love that slice of brotherhood.

You totally capture Sam's angst and Dean's protectiveness. Ah...those were the days. Thanks :)

[gidgetgal9]

I enjoyed the boy's 'chick flick moment' it worked so well here. :)