Comments | asdfghjklhynne: [CHAPTERED] In Just One Shot (7/10)

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[CHAPTERED] In Just One Shot (7/10)

Apr 23, 2016 17:59

Title: In Just One Shot
Author: asdfghjklhynne; former lhynnechan
Pairing: YunJae (Yunho x Jaejoong), RicSyung (Eric x Hyesung)
Genre: High School Alternative Universe, Fluff, Romance, Boy x Boy, Supernatural?
Length: Chaptered; (7/10)
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I wish they were mine... but they aren't. Even the plot.

Summary: Desperation led Kim Jaejoong to request a ( Read more... )

fic: injustoneshot, band: shinhwa, length: chaptered, band: dbsk/tvxq/jyj, rating: pg-13, pairing: eric/hyesung, pairing: yunho/jaejoong, type: fic

Comments 22

bluepinkfairy April 23 2016, 10:19:18 UTC

SPOT !!! MINEE

asdfghjklhynne April 23 2016, 10:28:25 UTC

yours ♥

bluepinkfairy April 23 2016, 11:08:02 UTC

Omg so much happened in this one chapter I am just like jabdkabvsksnkd
First it was sad, then action, then sad and then sweet and I went 'aaaawwww ♡ '
What are you doing to my feeels T^T
Oh jae realizing that you are in deep just now is way too late ! You have to win over Yunho now ! (Good luck with that)
I really liked the chapter ! And can't wait for the next one next week 😍😍😍

asdfghjklhynne April 23 2016, 11:35:44 UTC

i wrote too much, it took me about 2k omg
what a rollercoaster ride, had fun? :)))
next week would be more intense? haha
thank u 😘

u_ro April 23 2016, 18:25:37 UTC

For now, I love this chapter the most!
I don't know how to explain it. But so much emotions are floating in this chapter. I have my doubt that Yunho remembered but he just pretend like he didn't. Because if he didn't have any memory to what has been going on for the past two weeks, who in their right mind receiving all the kicks and punches from enemies just to save a guy who who don't have any connection with him. (Wow, that's a long sentence.)
Yunho is so cool. I think I fell in love with him too (sorry, Jaejoong).

asdfghjklhynne April 24 2016, 00:59:56 UTC

yunho is just too cool sometimes haha
i love this chapter too :">
sankyuuu :*

elle1501 April 23 2016, 20:35:02 UTC

Tq for the update...

asdfghjklhynne April 24 2016, 01:00:45 UTC

enjoyyyy :)

kattan69 April 24 2016, 01:49:27 UTC

All of know that the portion doesn't really works...it is just a ploy to have Jae believes it and a chance for Yunho (who secretly likes Jae) to act as his lover and make Jae to fall in love with him instead. Min has been dropping hints, so he is in cohoots with Yunho all along.

But Jae wouldn't like it one bit once he knows he has been played.

asdfghjklhynne April 24 2016, 01:57:17 UTC

i'm also really worried about jae :(