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arysteia

Fic on Demand

May 13, 2009 21:24

For maudlinrose. Prompt #72 Fixed. The robot had a quirk. Clark/Lex.

( Apparently robot shenanigans are not as inherently amusing as I thought. Or maybe that's just Lex and Clark these days. )

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Comments 13

maudlinrose May 13 2009, 09:57:05 UTC

Oh, ouch! And yet the ending leaves room for the happy ending of my dreams, yes?

The beginning of this made me snorfle and then it got all thoughtful and awesome. Thankyou! :D

arysteia May 13 2009, 10:03:20 UTC

I was trying to be funny, I swear. And then it got all serious all by itself. And I kept thinking of your hopeful little smiley, and I couldn't leave it like that. So, yes, absolutely there's potential for a happy ending. All anyone can ask for, right?

I'm so glad you enjoyed it. You're very welcome.

disprove May 13 2009, 10:27:32 UTC

This deserves several ouches and an enthusiastic whoa.

Utilising a little super speed of his own

Hee! Also, I really loved what you've done with the scientists.

arysteia June 4 2009, 23:10:35 UTC

Right, first off I need to apologise to everyone for being so damn slack at replying, because your feedback means so much. Real life, who'd have it, eh?

I'm really glad you enjoyed it. I assumed it was going to be cracky, from the prompt, and the ouch just brought itself. I miss Clark and Lex!

rivkat May 13 2009, 18:15:02 UTC

I love this! Poor Lex, who thinks the problem is in his robots and not in what he wants. And I like that the real Clark has some forgiveness left in him.

arysteia June 4 2009, 23:13:42 UTC

Right, first off I need to apologise to everyone for being so damn slack at replying, because your feedback means so much. Real life, who'd have it, eh?

Thank you so much! The flaw is not in the stars...

lapetite_kiki May 14 2009, 00:14:55 UTC

Oh Lex!

nerowill May 14 2009, 03:58:01 UTC

Cute and funny and then rather sad... I liked. :) Any chance for more?

arysteia June 4 2009, 23:15:06 UTC

Right, first off I need to apologise to everyone for being so damn slack at replying, because your feedback means so much. Real life, who'd have it, eh?

It made itself sad against my express wishes! I don't know where I'd go with this particular scenario, so I think I'd better leave the boys to their slim ray of hope. Plenty more wee fics, though.

*hugs*