PH - retrace 27
彡I did my best, but it may not be the best translation.
彡Some things may not sound right in English...Sorry ^^;
彡I kept the -sama/-san/etc. suffixes from Japanese. It's a personal preference, but since I know some people don't like this I thought I should put it here.
彡I did not translate SFX.
彡Do not repost this translation. If you want to share, link to this post.
彡Do not use for scanlations without proofreading it first.
彡Corrections are very welcome!
彡 PH translations index
Retrace XXVII - Get Out of the Pool (That One Step)
001
Jack: To think we'd meet again like this...Lotti.
Lotti: ...
-The hero of the Tragedy of Sabrie...-
-Jack=Bezarius!!-
002-003
004
-Hey, can you hear it?-
-This melody-
Lotti: The sound of an orgel...?
Lotti: I wonder what could it be...
005
-That's a very sad melody-
-But,-
-It's as if I can feel a strong light from somewhere...-
Lotti: ...!
Lotti: Glen-sama...!?
006
Lotti: Who's there!!
???: Well well...What a brave lady you are.
Lotti: And you are...?
???: Aah, don't worry, I may look suspicious but I'm not like that.
Lotti: In this situation, shouldn't you say [I'm not suspicious]?
???: Ahahaha. But because I look suspicious you suspect me, so if I claimed that [I'm not suspicious] wouldn't you suspect me even more?
007
Glen: Jack, stop teasing Charlotte.
Jack: Charlotte!
Jack: Then it's alright if I use the diminutive Lotti, isn't it?
Jack: I'm glad to meet you, Miss Lotti.
Jack: My name is Jack=Bezarius.
Jack: Just a humble orgel craftsman.
008
Lotti: Orgel craftsman...?
-The Bezarius house didn't own a big fortune, it was a third rate noble family, and he was the third son.-
(Jack: Ahaha...I love climbing trees~)
-Maybe because he was in a position where he didn't have any expectations from his parents,-
(Jack: My clothes are dirty? I don't ca~re.)
(Jack: Ahahahaha...I love swimming~)
(Jack: There's no match for your beauty, please accept this flower...)
-he was too extravagant, to the extent that he'd become irritating, doing things at his own pace.-
Lotti: Hey, Did you know?
Lotti: An ordinary person shouldn't be allowed to enter the Baskerville mansion!
Lotti: And yet! How do you manage to sneak in, each and every time! (I'll pull out this annoying braid!!)
Jack: I was told about a passageway! (It hu~rts!)
009
Lotti: Passageway?
Jack: That's right. I was told I should use it when I come here.
Jack: By Glen.
Lotti: Hey...
Lotti: You always come to meet Glen-sama but...
Lotti: ...Umm...With that person...
Lotti: What connection do you have with him?
Jack: Such a thing...You should ask Glen personally...
Lotti: I-It's impossible, isn't that obvious? Because I can't be so familiar with that person...
010
Jack: The Baskerville house...
Jack: Continuously concealing its existence itself in darkness, carrying on with their duty, the people that have drawn a line and isolated themselves from the other nobles...
Jack: And governing that household, just one man, the head of the family, Glen=Baskerville...
Lotti: Just...how much did Glen-sama tell you about us?
Jack: Who knows...? I'm not really interested, and I don't understand it all that well.
Jack: And I don't even care about it to that extent.
Jack: But to me, that guy
Jack: is a precious person, whose values are a motivation to me...That's right, in other words, he's...
011
Jack: My friend.
=[Friend]=
-That was a word without any true feelings-
Lotti: The Glen-sama that I know...
-liked being alone, I expected him to dislike such a loud guy.-
Lotti: And then...
012
-Then...-
=He smiled...!!?=
Jack: A!
Jack: Lotti, you came at the right moment...
Jack: Come come!
013
Jack: How is it?
Jack: I made it myself!
Lotti: ...Eh!? This...you made it!?
Jack: That's right!
Lotti: But you...You said you were an orgel craftsman...
Jack: Orgels, watches, the source of power is the same.
Jack: Besides, look...
014
Jack: I'm doing my job well, aren't I?
-Ah...-
Lotti: This song...
-The one that I could hear at that time...-
Lotti: Such a beautiful melody...
Lotti: What's the title?
Glen: [Lacey]
015
Glen: This song is something I created.
Glen: ...Are you interested in it?
-That-
-is an art that Glen-sama and Jack made up together.-
-It felt like there was no place for me in there, and I regretted it.-
-...But still-
016
-Because Glen-sama had smiled,-
-I thought that was enough.-
-Even if only for a short time, for an instant-
-That such a peaceful time could go on,-
-That's what I wished for...-
-However...-
Lotti: ...Glen-sama...Just now...What did you...!?
017
Fang: The people in this castle...You want us to kill them all...!?
-The nobles of the metropolis Sabrie were assembled at that castle...-
Fang: Why do such a thing...Glen-sama!
Glen: Silence!!
Glen: This is an order!!
Glen: Women, children, it doesn't matter...
018
Glen: Kill all the people that are in this castle until there's no one left!!!
Glen: Now!!!
-Until the [red] robes of the Baskervilles were dyed [black],-
-We killed,-
-and killed,-
-and killed...-
019
-And later it turned into the incident that is now known as "the Tragedy of Sabrie".-
Lotti: Hey Jack...You must know, don't you...
Lotti: Where is...Glen-sama now...
020
Jack: ...Lotti, don't misunderstand me.
Jack: The reason that I came out is not to talk with you.
Jack: It's to make you withdraw from this place.
Lotti: What's with that self-importance!!
Lotti: Being called the hero, it must make you feel good!?
Lotti: In spite of saying that he was your friend...
Lotti: After that incident your house became very successful, you must've been really happy!?
021
Jack: I...!
Jack: ...That I...killed Glen for fame,
Jack: is that what you want to say?
Jack: ...Listen well Charlotte,
Jack: I won't give you any more warnings.
022
Jack: There's no way you can win against the power of B-Rabbit.
Jack: So...move back!
Fang: Lotti-san!
Lotti: ...
Jack: ...
Jack: ...Lotti, I won't tell you more, in order to protect the honor of my friend.
023
Jack: But if you want to do the same thing over again, I will once again become the blade that will destroy the death-gods.
Lotti: ...Do as you wish.
Lotti: We are just obeying our master's orders.
Lotti: If you want to kill Glen,
Lotti: no matter how many times,
Lotti: every time
024
Lotti: I'll show you that I will find that person...!!
-His presence vanished...?-
Jack: Really...Using people is rough, isn't it...
Jack: If I hadn't got out quickly, I would have properly said it... {TN: By 'got out' he means to get out of Oz's body, cutting off the connection with him}
025
Oz: ...
Oz: Jack...
Jack: ...Oz,
Jack: Why are people
Jack: such weak beings...
Oz: Jack!
Jack: ...Me, as well as
026
Jack: Glen too.
Oz: !
-What's this...What's coming...into my head...!?-
Oz: Uh...
=Why!!!=
027
Jack: Why are you doing such a thing...
Jack: Answer me...
Jack: Answer me, Glen...!!
028
Glen: Jack...
-Stop it-
Glen: I will...!! {TN: Word by word, he says "I...you!!" but that doesn't really work in English. He probably wants to say "I will kill you"}
-I don't want to kill you-
-I-
-Don't want to kill you!!!-
029
Reo: Ah!
Reo: You woke up.
Oz: ...Eh...?
Reo: Are you alright? You had a terrible nightmare.
Reo: It seems that those people in red are already gone but...it was terrible.
030
Eliot: Oh...You finally recovered?
Reo: Eliot!
Reo: How was it?
Eliot: The road we came on is blocked, but I found an exit that goes through the forest.
Eliot: We've got more or less distanced from the school, but...if we go by foot from here...
Eliot: Hey, are you listening, you idiot!!
Oz: Wh-Wat!?
Eliot: I'm saying we're getting outside!
Eliot: Come, quickly!
Reo: Stop it, Eliot.
031
-My head...feels heavy...-
-What flowed inside me earlier...-
-Were those Jack's feelings...?-
=I don't want to kill you...!!=
-While his soul was crying like that, he still pointed his sword at his friend...-
-I thought it was heart-breaking, painful, my chest felt like it was about to crush...-
-Even so, he said that.-
-[Jack: I will once again become the blade that will destroy the death-gods.]-
032
-If it was me-
-...I would run away for sure.-
-I couldn't have ended up pointing a sword at a friend.-
-Even if it had come to a fight, I would just accept it-
-[Therefore you get the feeling that you're saving someone else!?]-
-I don't think like that.-
-Just like he said,-
-I just don't want get myself hurt.-
033
-Jack: Why are people such weak beings...-
-Stop it!-
-If you say you're weak, then what about me?-
-I can't carry anyone on my back-
-And yet-
-Even if it's my own appearance, I can't see it...-
-This is-
-my punishment for turning my eyes away from my own self.-
-I'm afraid of being rejected,-
-a coward who is merely sensitive to the reactions of those around me...-
034
-If it's not pointed out to me, I'm not aware of it...-
-Alice: You're sad now, aren't you?-
-I don't even understand what I'm being asked...-
-Break: Where exactly are you...?-
-That's right...-
-More than anyone,-
-more than anything,-
-I-
-can't understand my own self...-
035
Eliot: ...What's wrong?
Oz: Nothing...I just feel a bit down...
Eliot: Ha?
Oz: I realized...the extent of my uselessness...
Reo: ...It's because Eliot said too much...
Eliot: Are you saying it's my fault!?
Reo: It's your bad for saying what you wanted to say, without thinking about the other's situation...
Eliot: Th-that may be so but...
Oz: ...I...
036
Oz: I have always been in the same spot.
Oz: Ever since that time
Oz: I haven't moved forward not even a little...
Oz: That's deplorable.
Oz: It's regrettable...!
037
Eliot: Are you stupid?
Eliot: Just like Reo said, I may not know your situation, but...
Eliot: But you [noticed] didn't you!?
038
Eliot: If that's so...
Eliot: Then you've advanced a step further from that point!!
Eliot: From now on do as you like!
Eliot: If you want to advance, or go back...
Eliot: Or if you want to take another road, it all...
039
Eliot: depends on you!
040
Reo: ...You're so kind, aren't you, Eliot.
Eliot: What's that!
Reo: I didn't really say anything?
Eliot: You did!
041
-...My...-
-The instant I knew my own [weakness],-
-If that's the start of [strength],-
-I can still-
-move forward.-
-Even having these sloppy thoughts,-
-Even so-
042
-I won't feel ashamed in this light!-
043
Oz: ...By the way, I haven't expressed my thanks.
Eliot: A?
Oz: Well, you helped me a lot.
Oz: Thank you,
Oz: Eliot!
Eliot: ...It's not like there's something you need to thank me for.
Reo: Awkward, awkward!
Eliot: I'm not feeling awkward!!
044
Eliot: Rather than that, we have to hurry back to school...
Eliot: I've dropped my luggage too...though it's fine as long as the music score inside it is safe...
Oz: a!
Oz: Music score!?
Eliot: !?
Eliot: Wh-what's wrong?
-That's right. A lot of things happened and I forgot...-
-the reason I chased after them...!-
Oz: You two, before we met, did you do a four handed piano performance?
Eliot: ...Ha? How do you kn...
Oz: Never mind that now!
045
Oz: I...want to know more about that song!
Oz: The composer, title, anything is fine...!
Eliot: Ha?
Eliot: You stupid,
Eliot: What do you think you're saying?
Oz: Wai...
Eliot: It's a song I created.
046
Eliot: ...
Eliot: The title is...
Eliot: [Lacey]
-Hey...-
047
-Can you hear it...? This melody-
Eliot: What?
Eliot: Do you have any complains?
-This dissonance caused the distorted wheels-
-to start spinning...-
Comments, questions, etc. are welcome!
彡Some things may not sound right in English...Sorry ^^;
彡I kept the -sama/-san/etc. suffixes from Japanese. It's a personal preference, but since I know some people don't like this I thought I should put it here.
彡I did not translate SFX.
彡Do not repost this translation. If you want to share, link to this post.
彡Do not use for scanlations without proofreading it first.
彡Corrections are very welcome!
彡 PH translations index
Retrace XXVII - Get Out of the Pool (That One Step)
001
Jack: To think we'd meet again like this...Lotti.
Lotti: ...
-The hero of the Tragedy of Sabrie...-
-Jack=Bezarius!!-
002-003
004
-Hey, can you hear it?-
-This melody-
Lotti: The sound of an orgel...?
Lotti: I wonder what could it be...
005
-That's a very sad melody-
-But,-
-It's as if I can feel a strong light from somewhere...-
Lotti: ...!
Lotti: Glen-sama...!?
006
Lotti: Who's there!!
???: Well well...What a brave lady you are.
Lotti: And you are...?
???: Aah, don't worry, I may look suspicious but I'm not like that.
Lotti: In this situation, shouldn't you say [I'm not suspicious]?
???: Ahahaha. But because I look suspicious you suspect me, so if I claimed that [I'm not suspicious] wouldn't you suspect me even more?
007
Glen: Jack, stop teasing Charlotte.
Jack: Charlotte!
Jack: Then it's alright if I use the diminutive Lotti, isn't it?
Jack: I'm glad to meet you, Miss Lotti.
Jack: My name is Jack=Bezarius.
Jack: Just a humble orgel craftsman.
008
Lotti: Orgel craftsman...?
-The Bezarius house didn't own a big fortune, it was a third rate noble family, and he was the third son.-
(Jack: Ahaha...I love climbing trees~)
-Maybe because he was in a position where he didn't have any expectations from his parents,-
(Jack: My clothes are dirty? I don't ca~re.)
(Jack: Ahahahaha...I love swimming~)
(Jack: There's no match for your beauty, please accept this flower...)
-he was too extravagant, to the extent that he'd become irritating, doing things at his own pace.-
Lotti: Hey, Did you know?
Lotti: An ordinary person shouldn't be allowed to enter the Baskerville mansion!
Lotti: And yet! How do you manage to sneak in, each and every time! (I'll pull out this annoying braid!!)
Jack: I was told about a passageway! (It hu~rts!)
009
Lotti: Passageway?
Jack: That's right. I was told I should use it when I come here.
Jack: By Glen.
Lotti: Hey...
Lotti: You always come to meet Glen-sama but...
Lotti: ...Umm...With that person...
Lotti: What connection do you have with him?
Jack: Such a thing...You should ask Glen personally...
Lotti: I-It's impossible, isn't that obvious? Because I can't be so familiar with that person...
010
Jack: The Baskerville house...
Jack: Continuously concealing its existence itself in darkness, carrying on with their duty, the people that have drawn a line and isolated themselves from the other nobles...
Jack: And governing that household, just one man, the head of the family, Glen=Baskerville...
Lotti: Just...how much did Glen-sama tell you about us?
Jack: Who knows...? I'm not really interested, and I don't understand it all that well.
Jack: And I don't even care about it to that extent.
Jack: But to me, that guy
Jack: is a precious person, whose values are a motivation to me...That's right, in other words, he's...
011
Jack: My friend.
=[Friend]=
-That was a word without any true feelings-
Lotti: The Glen-sama that I know...
-liked being alone, I expected him to dislike such a loud guy.-
Lotti: And then...
012
-Then...-
=He smiled...!!?=
Jack: A!
Jack: Lotti, you came at the right moment...
Jack: Come come!
013
Jack: How is it?
Jack: I made it myself!
Lotti: ...Eh!? This...you made it!?
Jack: That's right!
Lotti: But you...You said you were an orgel craftsman...
Jack: Orgels, watches, the source of power is the same.
Jack: Besides, look...
014
Jack: I'm doing my job well, aren't I?
-Ah...-
Lotti: This song...
-The one that I could hear at that time...-
Lotti: Such a beautiful melody...
Lotti: What's the title?
Glen: [Lacey]
015
Glen: This song is something I created.
Glen: ...Are you interested in it?
-That-
-is an art that Glen-sama and Jack made up together.-
-It felt like there was no place for me in there, and I regretted it.-
-...But still-
016
-Because Glen-sama had smiled,-
-I thought that was enough.-
-Even if only for a short time, for an instant-
-That such a peaceful time could go on,-
-That's what I wished for...-
-However...-
Lotti: ...Glen-sama...Just now...What did you...!?
017
Fang: The people in this castle...You want us to kill them all...!?
-The nobles of the metropolis Sabrie were assembled at that castle...-
Fang: Why do such a thing...Glen-sama!
Glen: Silence!!
Glen: This is an order!!
Glen: Women, children, it doesn't matter...
018
Glen: Kill all the people that are in this castle until there's no one left!!!
Glen: Now!!!
-Until the [red] robes of the Baskervilles were dyed [black],-
-We killed,-
-and killed,-
-and killed...-
019
-And later it turned into the incident that is now known as "the Tragedy of Sabrie".-
Lotti: Hey Jack...You must know, don't you...
Lotti: Where is...Glen-sama now...
020
Jack: ...Lotti, don't misunderstand me.
Jack: The reason that I came out is not to talk with you.
Jack: It's to make you withdraw from this place.
Lotti: What's with that self-importance!!
Lotti: Being called the hero, it must make you feel good!?
Lotti: In spite of saying that he was your friend...
Lotti: After that incident your house became very successful, you must've been really happy!?
021
Jack: I...!
Jack: ...That I...killed Glen for fame,
Jack: is that what you want to say?
Jack: ...Listen well Charlotte,
Jack: I won't give you any more warnings.
022
Jack: There's no way you can win against the power of B-Rabbit.
Jack: So...move back!
Fang: Lotti-san!
Lotti: ...
Jack: ...
Jack: ...Lotti, I won't tell you more, in order to protect the honor of my friend.
023
Jack: But if you want to do the same thing over again, I will once again become the blade that will destroy the death-gods.
Lotti: ...Do as you wish.
Lotti: We are just obeying our master's orders.
Lotti: If you want to kill Glen,
Lotti: no matter how many times,
Lotti: every time
024
Lotti: I'll show you that I will find that person...!!
-His presence vanished...?-
Jack: Really...Using people is rough, isn't it...
Jack: If I hadn't got out quickly, I would have properly said it... {TN: By 'got out' he means to get out of Oz's body, cutting off the connection with him}
025
Oz: ...
Oz: Jack...
Jack: ...Oz,
Jack: Why are people
Jack: such weak beings...
Oz: Jack!
Jack: ...Me, as well as
026
Jack: Glen too.
Oz: !
-What's this...What's coming...into my head...!?-
Oz: Uh...
=Why!!!=
027
Jack: Why are you doing such a thing...
Jack: Answer me...
Jack: Answer me, Glen...!!
028
Glen: Jack...
-Stop it-
Glen: I will...!! {TN: Word by word, he says "I...you!!" but that doesn't really work in English. He probably wants to say "I will kill you"}
-I don't want to kill you-
-I-
-Don't want to kill you!!!-
029
Reo: Ah!
Reo: You woke up.
Oz: ...Eh...?
Reo: Are you alright? You had a terrible nightmare.
Reo: It seems that those people in red are already gone but...it was terrible.
030
Eliot: Oh...You finally recovered?
Reo: Eliot!
Reo: How was it?
Eliot: The road we came on is blocked, but I found an exit that goes through the forest.
Eliot: We've got more or less distanced from the school, but...if we go by foot from here...
Eliot: Hey, are you listening, you idiot!!
Oz: Wh-Wat!?
Eliot: I'm saying we're getting outside!
Eliot: Come, quickly!
Reo: Stop it, Eliot.
031
-My head...feels heavy...-
-What flowed inside me earlier...-
-Were those Jack's feelings...?-
=I don't want to kill you...!!=
-While his soul was crying like that, he still pointed his sword at his friend...-
-I thought it was heart-breaking, painful, my chest felt like it was about to crush...-
-Even so, he said that.-
-[Jack: I will once again become the blade that will destroy the death-gods.]-
032
-If it was me-
-...I would run away for sure.-
-I couldn't have ended up pointing a sword at a friend.-
-Even if it had come to a fight, I would just accept it-
-[Therefore you get the feeling that you're saving someone else!?]-
-I don't think like that.-
-Just like he said,-
-I just don't want get myself hurt.-
033
-Jack: Why are people such weak beings...-
-Stop it!-
-If you say you're weak, then what about me?-
-I can't carry anyone on my back-
-And yet-
-Even if it's my own appearance, I can't see it...-
-This is-
-my punishment for turning my eyes away from my own self.-
-I'm afraid of being rejected,-
-a coward who is merely sensitive to the reactions of those around me...-
034
-If it's not pointed out to me, I'm not aware of it...-
-Alice: You're sad now, aren't you?-
-I don't even understand what I'm being asked...-
-Break: Where exactly are you...?-
-That's right...-
-More than anyone,-
-more than anything,-
-I-
-can't understand my own self...-
035
Eliot: ...What's wrong?
Oz: Nothing...I just feel a bit down...
Eliot: Ha?
Oz: I realized...the extent of my uselessness...
Reo: ...It's because Eliot said too much...
Eliot: Are you saying it's my fault!?
Reo: It's your bad for saying what you wanted to say, without thinking about the other's situation...
Eliot: Th-that may be so but...
Oz: ...I...
036
Oz: I have always been in the same spot.
Oz: Ever since that time
Oz: I haven't moved forward not even a little...
Oz: That's deplorable.
Oz: It's regrettable...!
037
Eliot: Are you stupid?
Eliot: Just like Reo said, I may not know your situation, but...
Eliot: But you [noticed] didn't you!?
038
Eliot: If that's so...
Eliot: Then you've advanced a step further from that point!!
Eliot: From now on do as you like!
Eliot: If you want to advance, or go back...
Eliot: Or if you want to take another road, it all...
039
Eliot: depends on you!
040
Reo: ...You're so kind, aren't you, Eliot.
Eliot: What's that!
Reo: I didn't really say anything?
Eliot: You did!
041
-...My...-
-The instant I knew my own [weakness],-
-If that's the start of [strength],-
-I can still-
-move forward.-
-Even having these sloppy thoughts,-
-Even so-
042
-I won't feel ashamed in this light!-
043
Oz: ...By the way, I haven't expressed my thanks.
Eliot: A?
Oz: Well, you helped me a lot.
Oz: Thank you,
Oz: Eliot!
Eliot: ...It's not like there's something you need to thank me for.
Reo: Awkward, awkward!
Eliot: I'm not feeling awkward!!
044
Eliot: Rather than that, we have to hurry back to school...
Eliot: I've dropped my luggage too...though it's fine as long as the music score inside it is safe...
Oz: a!
Oz: Music score!?
Eliot: !?
Eliot: Wh-what's wrong?
-That's right. A lot of things happened and I forgot...-
-the reason I chased after them...!-
Oz: You two, before we met, did you do a four handed piano performance?
Eliot: ...Ha? How do you kn...
Oz: Never mind that now!
045
Oz: I...want to know more about that song!
Oz: The composer, title, anything is fine...!
Eliot: Ha?
Eliot: You stupid,
Eliot: What do you think you're saying?
Oz: Wai...
Eliot: It's a song I created.
046
Eliot: ...
Eliot: The title is...
Eliot: [Lacey]
-Hey...-
047
-Can you hear it...? This melody-
Eliot: What?
Eliot: Do you have any complains?
-This dissonance caused the distorted wheels-
-to start spinning...-
Comments, questions, etc. are welcome!