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sheafrotherdon November 11 2008, 20:31:40 UTC
I love this! I really, really love this, the way it spins out from something ordinary to something creepy and heart-rending. The pace of the words really matches throughout, and I love Rodney's babbling, his innate self even as he's changing, and the hopeful, stubborn peace that comes at the end.

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danceswithgary November 11 2008, 21:52:17 UTC
A great hold-your-breath story and a fabulous piece of art!

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miscellanny November 11 2008, 21:56:57 UTC
The way it continued was so awesome and so much better than I could have thought, and the art is absolutely beautiful. Thanks, guys, I'm so pleased to have been a part of this. :)

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sandalstrap November 11 2008, 23:08:12 UTC
Oooh, thrilling and fascinating! I wondered where the story was going to go. elli, the end collage is completely gorgeous.

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jadesfire November 12 2008, 17:36:20 UTC
Oh wow. The pace of this is wonderful, and I love how it starts sounding routine and innocuous, only to twist its way to something taut and terrifying. The imagery is so vivid and I love the hard hope at the end.

The artwork matches this so well - it's great to see how it grew with the story, and the final collage looks stunning.

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