Good Job, Z: Sand Friends.
He stared at the bits of sand stuck in between his fingers. The grains were so tiny he wondered why it was there in this world. He wondered about its purpose as he turned his chubby baby fingers over and over as its surface reflect some sunlight.
Sitting in a corner of the sandbox all by himself, Liam looked around him. The other children were ( Read more... )
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Also hi!
But that was just amazing, oh god Zayn, I love subtly you let us know what his life's like and how Liam just accepts his life and that he needs to act older for his sister and mother.
Being underfed for the whole of last year had its advantages because even though he was a year behind in class, he fitted right in size-wise. that sentence kinda broke my heart..
Also, Zayn's knowledge of glass far surpasses mine and I'm not sure who I should be concerned for on that..
And Zayn's echoing and yeah..
This deserves a much better comment but it's getting late (and I'm super bad at writing comments.. sorry)
But yes please keep writing this!
Love your face :)
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but before that...
alksdjfhalsdkfjhasdfkjh THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! I DIDN'T EXPECT A COMMENT! I'm so happy! This is my first and I was nervous about people liking it and they do and you sending me this is the best part of my day!! Now i'm super motivated.
Throughout the story it will be in Liam's POV and we get bits and pieces of Zayn's life and how he becomes like that. Hi, can we be BFFS?! I don't even have friends on LJ yet! yeay yeay yeay!
I'm ranting and annoying you already aren't I? I'll go now bye.
Come back okay? Love your face more
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asrgyh (oh god something happened on the computer.. (yeah technology hates me so this is kinda a recurring theme the amount of times I've had to re-write ridiculously long comments..)) Now I'm really happy about you being really happy and I don't even know.. Wait this is your first fic!? Oh god I'm not even going to go in to how awful my first fic was.. so damn you but not really 'cause I love you
Oh cool, I love that idea of sort of learning about Zayn as Liam does and that there's still many questions unanswered.. Yes, we will be the greatest of friends and complain about how gay and gorgeous the boys are and how everything's awful and they're life ruiners! I have many feelings on these boys.. mostly negative and some related to puppies
Haha 'course not, you're awesome and it'll take a hell of a lot more to annoy me (if anything I'm going to annoy you..)
So.. I may have to use that in my defence when I get arrested for stalking you Love you and your face ( ... )
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So err... you really do like it?
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