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Good Job Z: Boogie Man

Dec 27, 2012 13:19

Part 1: Sand Friends
The second part to Good Job Z, This was a tad bit longer because I over-indulge on the finer details. I like to over do it. Sorry. Sorry it took so long too. If you're even following with this. Thank you for the feedback and comments!

Word Count: 5100k
( I'll protect you from all of the obscene )

my writings, one direction, liam/zayn, one direction au, children!onedirection, ziam fanfiction, ziam, zayn/liam, gjz

Comments 7

sarcasticweathe December 27 2012, 23:13:54 UTC

Oh god that was just ( ... )

artemistory December 28 2012, 00:27:55 UTC

omg that is the longest comment and i just looooove how you break each parts of the story and add your views in them. I'm forever grateful. You're one of the reasons why i continue writing this! akdjfskdjfs
I can't thank you enough. Why are you so nice to me! Liam's characters are quite set for me but even as a writer, Z's character is a mystery. I haven't fully figured him out yet.
I want their friendship to be a constant in their distorted life but I kinda foresee (and i haven't written out a definite plotline for this) them breaking apart at some point when Liam grows up. But I don't know....
I also don't know how far in the future I'm gonna continue writing these boys or whether I should put the rest of the members. I find it a bit too cliche. What do you think?

sarcasticweathe December 31 2012, 23:09:37 UTC

(Sorry for the lateness, this is kinda a theme with me)
Pfft you deserve much longer comments. I so didn't fangirl over that.. well I'm just going to have to write even better comments :DD
Haha, I'm really not nice (well I am but..) I'm just being honest :) Oh I love that, when you're discovering the character or plot along with the readers :D
I can imagine that, it's kinda the sandbox that keeps them together as they don't see each other any other time so as they grow up and away from the sandbox..
Hmm yeah you have to be careful and not just be throwing the other boys in just because they're the rest of 1D, if you find that their input or opinion would be useful.. but then you want to be careful with side stories and that not overshadowing Zayn and Liam's story.. So that helped in no way.. but I trust you to make the right decision ;)
I really need to get some 1D userpics :P

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artemistory December 29 2012, 07:59:54 UTC

ONE OF THE BEST FICS? Nooo I don't deserve that kind of recognition because this is only the second chapter and I've only started writing. There are a thousand and one fics that's absolutely better than mine. But I can't thank you enough for even taking the time to read it.

I will keep on writing this. I have a lot more ideas for how their lives are going to progress from here.

aivanmedl December 29 2012, 19:04:33 UTC

This is beyond sweet, i love your histories you are really talented!, i feel so happy when i read them, you make me believe in fairy tales.

artemistory December 30 2012, 12:37:45 UTC

awww thank you so much for reading! I'm not that talented. I just love expressing my personal feelings into stories and just jumbled up words. Fairy tales?My stories are farrrr from fairy tales. It's gonna be downhill from here but zayn and liam will have each other. =)

ext_1574413 December 31 2012, 11:57:20 UTC

She writes her story so descriptively and she seeks for praise when she doesnt even know how awesome her writings are. She reads tonnes of books, often defeating the weight of an aeroplane and she does one in hours or a few days. Of which I would give up within hours and barely reaching a quarter of the book. She's a mess in this, I can assure you. But I wish...