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artemisrae

FMA: These Rotten Lips

Mar 30, 2008 22:44

Title: These Rotten Lips
Rating: T (May be bordering M, for non-graphic description of adult situations, but I think it stays within a T rating.)
Summary: The girls Roy spends his time with tend to fall into one of four categories. Roy-centric, but Royai.
A/N: Good lord, where to start? Manga verse, based upon Roy's interactions with the girls in ( Read more... )

royxriza, fma, roy mustang

Comments 28

arantzain March 31 2008, 03:31:03 UTC

Superlative, both technically and in development. Lovely work.

Arantza

artemisrae March 31 2008, 03:56:59 UTC

*blush* All the technical credit goes to juxaposie, but man I'm glad you liked the fic. Thank you for reading!

Ikkaku approves, and he's in a different fandom<3 windxalchemist March 31 2008, 03:43:00 UTC

“Can I call you Elizabeth?” he asks breathlessly

That line right there, broke my heart. T^T
I really love your writing. :D
It has a feeling of easiness, and at the same time it's really entertaining. A good read. My, I haven't read good RoyAi in who knows how long.

can I friend you?

Re: Ikkaku is ten kinds of awesome, so I'm glad he approves artemisrae March 31 2008, 04:00:20 UTC

Oh thank you! I need to work more on my Royai (Ed and Winry tend to own me) so I'm really happy to hear that you think I pulled it off.

of course you can friend me! I love new friends!

Re: IchiRuki is also ten kinds of awesome<3 windxalchemist March 31 2008, 05:42:48 UTC

EdWin. :DDDD
RoyAi<33
Is it too much to hope that you write Ling/Ranfan

new friends, yayness<333

Re: IchiRuki is hearts forever artemisrae March 31 2008, 22:22:56 UTC

I DO have a lingxranfan tag.

But there aren't only a couple drabbles and I'm not sure how good they are. But I've tried before!

terracottabones March 31 2008, 06:08:18 UTC

ZOMG! You posted! I might just shout for joy for that simple fact - but your story was excellent. It was a beeeautiful picture of endurance, wit, hopelessness, love - everything. It was Roy Mustang. ;) Amazing job.

artemisrae March 31 2008, 22:32:11 UTC

Ohhhhh thank you. I don't write Roy often, and this story only went up after Josie promised me several times over that he really was in character. I'm very glad you approve.

dreamer1789 March 31 2008, 07:38:57 UTC

That is just amazing! ♥ I absolutely love the style, with Roy's quirks, contacts and categories. I love how you just play your readers with this, leading us in one direction then taking it in the other. XD

artemisrae March 31 2008, 22:39:17 UTC

Oh thank you! This is another one of those ones that I wrote backwards, after the last section popped into my head. It's a big pain to write it that way, so I'm glad you think it turned out okay.

annepackrat March 31 2008, 14:54:47 UTC

Very sad. Good Roy characterization though. I would probably label this M just to be safe.

artemisrae March 31 2008, 22:41:53 UTC

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it! I toyed with how to rate it, that's definitely true. In the end I think only the last section pushes it so I decided to take the risk. I'll probably end up changing it later.