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artemisrae

FMA: 52 Flavours, Prompt 23

Dec 20, 2007 21:13

Title: Out the Door
Series: Fullmetal Alchemist
Theme no.: 23. walk this way/we have been set free
Pairing: Ed/Winry, Al
Rating: K
Summary: Al brings home a girl. Winry’s less than impressed. Ed would be as well if he weren’t amused.
Notes: The first half of my double update for 52_flavours. Quite obviously intended to be set post series. I probably made Ed too ( Read more... )

fma, trio, edxwinry, 52flavours

Comments 25

evil_little_dog December 21 2007, 02:37:16 UTC

ahahaahhahah. Oh, Winry. Think of the fun you can have.

artemisrae December 21 2007, 21:31:11 UTC

Think of how she can distract Ed from stressing over exactly what Al is doing with his new girlfriend...

evil_little_dog December 22 2007, 01:31:02 UTC

HEE. I think it's actually the other way around...though My!Ed wonders if Al knows what condoms are for. *grin*

artemisrae December 24 2007, 01:50:17 UTC

HEY they read a lot! I'm more than sure Al's figured things out... (if only because could you imagine if Ed ended up an uncle before a father? I'm not sure who he'd choke first.)

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su_dama December 21 2007, 03:38:31 UTC

ooooo. THIS WAS FANTASTIC. I LOL'd and hehe'd at Winry. Ed's right.

artemisrae December 21 2007, 21:32:17 UTC

Thanks! Ed was right for once. I never make him right.

lyricnonsense December 21 2007, 04:36:24 UTC

*chuckle* Ed is really way too rational here, but the idea that he realized he was being ridiculous because he saw Winry doing what he did was great.

So cute again. *offers cookies*

artemisrae December 21 2007, 21:33:12 UTC

*takes cookies* I have to cut Ed a break once in a while right? (...and also because I feared a fic with Ed being all pouty and worried about Al would be too cliche? lol)

terracottabones December 21 2007, 07:30:50 UTC

Haha! You've struck gold again! Sometimes I wonder how you come up with these things - especially when my target is usually to make people cry buckets. Haha. Nice job!

artemisrae December 21 2007, 21:36:52 UTC

Seriously? They usually, rather irritatingly, start with the end sentence and then force me to write it backwards. It's a terribly inefficient way of writing.

But I'm glad you like them? LOL.

teniente_ross December 22 2007, 00:13:13 UTC

Amazing. You have a special talent in order to create magic moments between this two; plus, I love how Winry took this. It's like... i-wanna-hug-Winry love X3, she's cuteness all the way, being jelous =). And finally, the last sentence was a good point ;D.

Keep writing this good! ^__^

artemisrae December 24 2007, 01:56:38 UTC

Ahhh what is it with you guys and making me blush? I swear to god! In all honesty though, I don't think either Winry or Ed would handle Al getting a girlfriend that well, but Winry's really been the only girl in either Elric's life for so long...

teniente_ross December 24 2007, 02:08:04 UTC

I guess they would become protective about Al, sure =). One because of his older-brother role, and the other one because of what you show in your fic (indeed, Winry has been the only girl in their lives, as you said). But sooner or later, Ed and Winry would have to accept that our dear Al had a girlfriend (who knows, maybe Mei? x3 I haven't read enough manga yet, but rumours about them are all around!).

And well, making people blush is one of my hobbies xD. But well, that you're a amazing Ed/Winry writer is a fact =)(at least, for me XD, I enjoy your works sincerely!)

Mmm... too much talkative today, I'd better go bed right now. See you! =)