FMA: 52 Flavours, Prompt 45

[artemisrae]

Title: Every Other Time
Series: Fullmetal Alchemist
Theme no.: 45. Misery with tenderness
Pairing: Ed/Winry
Rating: M - descriptions of hand-related things.
Summary: Ed’s attitude regarding automail attachment evolves over time.
Notes: Third of three update for 52_flavours , and a companion to Prompt 26. Just a little bit of naughtiness in the home stretch - I had

Comments

[su_dama]

I cannot express how well and natural this flows. It is hot, but in an obscured way, and damn, I wish I could see more of this kind of fic out there. You really know how to write them.

God, I hope this Ed/Winry phase of mine lasts for a long while. LOL.

[artemisrae]

I'm glad you approve - I'm always so nervous when I post fics like these no matter how much my beta likes them.

And I hope it lasts a long time too! (Even if I'm almost finished with this challenge...)

[evil_little_dog]

Oh, Ed, Winry's never gonna change and you're happy about it, really.

The progression of this is just too much fun.

[artemisrae]

Of course he's happy about it! She got him off!

Ahh I'm glad you liked it. I'm happy I managed to get both halves of the story up without chickening out.

[evil_little_dog]

Well, you know, men. *giggles*

[lyricnonsense]

*grin* I feel like I should be showering you with praise just to ensure you'll keep posting things like this.

But seriously, very well done and very restrained. I absolutely adore your deft hand with this kind of thing. Not too much detail, but just enough to get things going.

Leave it to Winry to use that particular method to shorten Ed's recovery time. :)

[artemisrae]

You can praise me all you want (tis much appreciated) but that won't make my blush at having written it go away. At least I'm getting better about actually publishing these.

And hey, Winry has learned to take advantage of Ed when he's sitting still and quietly. Rare moments, those.

[rainbow_cnxn]

That was...um... I think I need to go take a cold shower now. I like how Ed can't even get himself to say "jacking me off", haha. For all his roughness, he does seem a bit prude for that.

Oh, and it's always more fun when there's a chance of getting caught, isn't there? ;)

Semen-encrusted towels among all the other work towels, ew. Garfiel disapproves.

[artemisrae]

Hee, I'm glad you liked it! Ed totally can be prudish, even if he would object to being told that.

Winry is very discreet. Garfield never finds out.

[terracottabones]

Haha...so naughty. I can only titter in approval.

[artemisrae]

Thank you! I can only grin in thanks and go back to blushing furiously.