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artemisrae

Avatar: Shadows in the Mind: Chapter 15

Jul 06, 2007 11:35

Title: Shadows in the Mind
Summary: Five years after the war is over, the world is finally settling into an uneasy peace. When the Avatar and his friends disappear into a swamp in the southwest Earth Kingdom, they find themselves fighting not only for their lives but to prevent another way from breaking out. Chapter 15: Aang finally receives some ( Read more... )

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Re: *spaz* artemisrae July 11 2007, 23:30:36 UTC

*grin* I'm certainly glad you enjoyed it! (AHHHHH ACTION SCENES ARE SO SUCKY TO WRITE TOO I'm glad you think they came out okay!)

And god Azula and Zhao are so totally my effed up advantage taking OTP. I've been planning that scene since... what Chapter 4?

retad July 16 2007, 03:38:25 UTC

Oh yeah, what a marvelous chapter! And thank you, thank you, for making Azula turn her back from Zuko's outstretched hand. And yeah, what a wimp Zuko, for stretching it out in the first place. That is why you gotta love him in the end.

Just all around excellent!
(But I gotta admit, why can Ty Lee see all this shit and Sokka can't?)

artemisrae July 16 2007, 13:57:24 UTC

Oh Zuko. My beta pointed out that no matter what happens to him, he's still rather naively optimistic, and yeah that is totally why I love him.

As for Ty Lee and Sokka, it merely boils down to their personalities - the same reason Ty Lee could sense the bad stuff going on before they even entered the swamp: she's simply more spiritually inclined. Sokka does not want to see all that stuff, so he doesn't. (God, can you imagine his whining? "I thought ONE Avatar was bad enough...")

I'm glad you enjoyed it!