Comments | artemisrae: The Whole and More Than All (2/3)

artemisrae

The Whole and More Than All (2/3)

Mar 03, 2010 22:04

( love is more thicker than forget/it is more sane and sunly/and more it cannot die )

fma, edxwinry, big bang fic

Comments 12

evil_little_dog March 4 2010, 04:46:42 UTC

Oh...ouch. OUCH.

...excellent cliffhanger, mind you.

artemisrae March 5 2010, 00:46:05 UTC

HA, thank the LJ word count limit on entries for that one. I originally wanted to cut it after the next scene. Which, in hindsight, is an even crueler cliff hanger...

evil_little_dog March 5 2010, 01:02:39 UTC

OoOoO.

enemytosleep March 4 2010, 17:05:19 UTC

SO Ed... SO Winry ... I'm all anxious now what with the tension in Rush Valley and this strain on their relationship. *scurries off to part 3*

artemisrae March 5 2010, 00:52:38 UTC

*beams* I'm glad you found it tense, it's hard to keep that going in a fic, especially a longer one.

enemytosleep March 5 2010, 18:16:27 UTC

Tell me about it *eyes on Big Bang fic*

enemytosleep March 5 2010, 18:16:46 UTC

*own - yay typos!

Thread 5

kurunya March 5 2010, 06:25:31 UTC

Aww!!! But Ed was trying to help! He's worried! I WOULD BE TOO! Come on Winry, dont be so stubborn! -goes read the next- This is an evil cliffy...

artemisrae March 6 2010, 00:22:31 UTC

He is worried, but he MAYBE should have approached her and talked about this first... Ed's gotta learn taht lesson sooner or later :)

your dialog anonymous April 18 2010, 03:17:19 UTC

is absolutely the best. Someday, I hope to be as good with mine. But I digress, arguments are part and parcel of real life relationships. This one was so searingly real, it was almost too painful to read. It will either make their relationship stronger - or destroy it utterly.

Re: your dialog artemisrae April 20 2010, 03:00:26 UTC

Oh thank you! It is pleasing to know that my habit of walking around talking to myself (out loud) pays off!