Memories - Chapter 2: Wondering

[artemisphoenix]

Disclaimer: 'Gossip Girl' belongs to Cecily von Ziegesar, Josh Schwartz, and the CW. No copyright infringement intended.
Rating: PG-13
Summary: The women in Chuck’s life come to haunt him.

Comments

[pandorasbox88]

keep going, hun it's really good.

[artemisphoenix]

Thank you! :)

[yankeesam32935]

Hmm. I really don't like Bart right here. He obviously has no regard for his son and at least Lily cares enough to check up on him. Although on the show, I really don't like Lily at all.

I really like this story, Jackie. It's kind of haunting and I shouldn't be reading this, but it's beautifully written. Characterization is also spot on.

[artemisphoenix]

I know, how could I do that? But Bart will reappear in Ch6, I've already decided. I shall try to make him more like I love. But Ch4 has that! He's just dealing with grief in his own way.

I don't know if it's a good thing you're reading, and Ch4 is going to probably not feel good. :(

i'm glad you like the writing and feel that characterization is spot on. That's most important.

*hugs*

[cynicalshadows]

I was thinking that maybe Chuck's drinking was related to Blair, but from the way Bart is acting I'm starting to think maybe it has to do with his mom. Hmmm... Either way, I wanted to kick Bart for not really being concerned that Chuck hadn't come home. At least Lily was worried.

[artemisphoenix]

Yes, I love that I tricked so many on the Blair thing. HEHE. My goal. hehe.

Like I just told Sam, I know, how could I do that to Bart, but people deal differently. He'll show up in Ch6 - I have it planned - and hopefully it'll bring him back to how I usually have him. And he's in Ch4, and I think he's perfect. hehe.

Besides...um..His line to Lily..is from 1x17...when Lily said it was between her and S. And I threw it in her face. I really hated Lily when I wrote this story. lol

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