Yay! I am so glad you returned to this fic! This chapter was wonderful. I like the Bart/Lily stuff and how she is the only one who can get him to relaz at all. *squee* Oh, and the subtle references to Bart/Lily being like Chuck/Blair were made of win! I cannot wait to read more of this. It is great.
hehe..I like the LB stuff, too! Next part is the rest of the date. *giggles* She knows he's from humble beginnings. He wasn't always this 'stuffy.' And Lily used to be a groupie. She just wants some normal fun! And she's got Bart wrapped around her finger.
Oh, I'm so glad that you updated this because I love it!
I love Bart. I'll admit in it all of my fangirl pride and love! And I just adore the way you write Bart. He's still cold, cynical, and the Bart we all know, but there's a soft side buried deep within him that Lily brings out. And I also love the way you mentioned Lily sleeping with Rufus before the wedding. Something just never sits right with me about Rufus and Lily. The only time I like Lily is when she has scenes with Chuck, so let's hope there are a lot more this season!
Long live VdB! I think I might be turning into you. LOL!
Thank you! Something about Bart..he really speaks to me. I love writing him. He's still how he's portrayed, but you KNOW there's something inside. It comes out at times, but Josh&Co. wouldn't explore it. They're afraid of his awesomeness! And Lily is the one to bring it out. That's why he loves her and wants her.
I am a bitter fangirl. I will reference her infidenity. She is not a good person in relationships. LR make me sick. Lily is only okay with Chuck and should continue to have only LC scenes. LOL. Here's to S3!
i just read both chapters :) i love your portrayal of bart, i was never really his biggest fan primarily because of his relationship with chuck in season one but there was so much wasted potential once he married lily.
loved the line about not flirting with blair :) that makes it seem like bart is really making an effort to understand chuck.
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I love Bart. I'll admit in it all of my fangirl pride and love! And I just adore the way you write Bart. He's still cold, cynical, and the Bart we all know, but there's a soft side buried deep within him that Lily brings out. And I also love the way you mentioned Lily sleeping with Rufus before the wedding. Something just never sits right with me about Rufus and Lily. The only time I like Lily is when she has scenes with Chuck, so let's hope there are a lot more this season!
Long live VdB! I think I might be turning into you. LOL!
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I am a bitter fangirl. I will reference her infidenity. She is not a good person in relationships. LR make me sick. Lily is only okay with Chuck and should continue to have only LC scenes. LOL. Here's to S3!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
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loved the line about not flirting with blair :) that makes it seem like bart is really making an effort to understand chuck.
very excited about the VDB baby!!
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I'm glad you enjoy my portrayal. There's so much more than what they've let us see. :( And so much wasted potential, I agree. I hate Josh&Co. *kicks*
I'm very excited, too! hehe
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
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