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New F/K Story: One Small Thing (NC-17)

Jul 03, 2007 21:05

Title: One Small Thing
Podfic: here
Author: arrow00
Pairing: Fraser/RayK
Rating: NC-17
Wordcount: 1,840
Warnings: Cop/Mountie sex!
This is a little affected,
maybe, but it was fun to write.
Categories: First-time, experimental style
Summary: Fraser just needs to find that one small thing.

Update: This story now has a sequel: Operation: Stupid

( One Small Thing )

fic, f/k, ds, slash, fraser, rayk

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arrow00 July 4 2007, 16:06:38 UTC

::smileys:: He is very thorough, is he not? Thank you kindly.

j_s_cavalcante July 4 2007, 06:32:48 UTC

You have killed me *ded*.

I seriously love you.

I'm quoting something wonderful here, but there are a lot more wonderful parts. I am just too inarticulate now to say much more.

He cannot tell Ray that his eyes are the exact shade of blue that twilight yearns for. Or that the line of his jaw calls to Fraser maddeningly, hourly, that he needs to put his mouth there and feel the short, golden stubble sanding his lips raw. That he wants to kiss Ray with repeated, obsessive abandon.

God, that's beautiful, and God, the whole piece is incandescently HOT, bright and hot and terrific, and on that note I am going to sleep and, I hope, to dream. Guhhhhh!

arrow00 July 4 2007, 16:10:29 UTC

Heh, hi there sleepy-girl. I'm so pleased to have guh'd you. I am flushed with achievement. :)

Thank you for your note.

j_s_cavalcante July 5 2007, 01:21:18 UTC

I am flushed with achievement. :)

And so you should be, because it is TEH HOT. I am still contemplating the sensation of Fraser rubbing his cock against Ray's hairy thigh. That is so fucking hot it makes my eyes cross.

Now I am crosseyed and it is your fault. :)

arrow00 July 5 2007, 03:46:04 UTC

I should be more careful with teh dangerous Power of Pron. :o

Thread 5

malnpudl July 4 2007, 07:12:25 UTC

I am in love with the way that you use language. Time and again, your turns of phrase leave me startled and delighted.

Also? Hot. So very, very hot.

I am so very happy that you're writing in this fandom.

arrow00 July 4 2007, 16:11:32 UTC

Thank you, malnpudl. I'm likewise startled and delighted by your kind words. I'm very, *very* happy to be here.

malnpudl July 4 2007, 16:29:00 UTC

Call me Mal. It's so much easier. *g*

arrow00 July 4 2007, 16:51:59 UTC

Thanks. My fingers trip over that every time. :)

bertybertle July 4 2007, 08:51:52 UTC

Oh, SO lovely! Poor Fraser - I can feel his increasing desperation right from the start. And I even guessed the TV show! Yaaaaay me! And then much with the yummy hotness. *happy sigh* Thanks!

arrow00 July 4 2007, 16:13:14 UTC

Ha! You guessed it. I was hoping people would. I loved that show.

Thanks for writing.

snarkyducky July 4 2007, 10:39:15 UTC

The end of his altogether too articulate tongue is hanging at the edge of his teeth.
i bet if you did a poll, the majority of your readers would have been licking their lips too at that point..

Ray scratches his jaw, looks away.
that's so Ray i could see the scene in my head..

"I can do other things," Fraser says confidentially. "With my tongue, that is. It's an extremely versatile appendage, and mine is more agile than most-"
your Fraser voice ... *keyboard mashes*

i can't believe you made coccyx-petting sexy..!!
and i love your description of Ray's different laughs.. ♥

arrow00 July 4 2007, 16:19:44 UTC

Hey Snarky. I think we *should* do a poll about Ray's tongue. And that little bit at the back of his neck where his hair fluffs sideways.

I'm glad you liked my weird offering. I really thought folks would find it a little off-putting, with all the zig-zagging. Also, the almost complete lack of dialog. Just goes to show, I guess.

Thank you for your note!