New F/K Story: All the Space, and Time (NC-17) - Part 1

Aug 28, 2008 21:15

Title: All the Space, and Time
Author: arrow00
Pairing: Fraser/RayK
Rating: NC-17
Wordcount: 15,422 total
Warnings: Reference to non-con event (Fraser/Victoria). Could be triggery due to this. There are, however, no graphic descriptions.
Categories: FT, post-CoTW, angst up the ass
Beta: The fabulous nos4a2no9
Summary: Fraser had always found it comforting to keep ( Read more... )

mercy series, fic, f/k, ds, slash

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love_jackianto August 29 2008, 05:28:02 UTC
Mrs. Gamez, saying once, 'I want to give him a big hug, but I'm afraid I will wrinkle him.'
I love how you used that line; I was watching 'They Eat Horses, Don't They?' just the other day.

I really liked how you handled the sex scenes. '...his lips over the head of Ray's erection' and 'but oddly it felt almost as if Ray was giving him permission to feel excitement, to enjoy this, his touch upon his own body.'.

'Fraser dreamed that night of the north, a blinding white dream, oddly peaceful.'
Nice use of the snow theme.

Would you mind if I did a Fanart piece for the first part?

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love_jackianto August 29 2008, 05:30:42 UTC
By first part, I meant 'A Small Mercy'.

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arrow00 August 29 2008, 05:35:49 UTC
God, are you kidding? I would love it. I would draw sparkly hearts all AROUND you.

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love_jackianto August 29 2008, 16:26:09 UTC
'That's one of my very favorite eps!'
Yeah, I like Ray's meat suit. *points to icon*

'Nos commented in her beta that it was typical of me to make Fraser feel peace in a blizzard. :) '
I makes perfect sense to me; the snowy Canadian wilderness is his home.

'God, are you kidding? I would love it. '
I never kid about that kind of thing. I'll be sure to let you know when I post it.

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akamine_chan August 29 2008, 05:51:23 UTC
Oh, arrow. You've broken me again...

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arrow00 August 29 2008, 05:57:58 UTC
I'm sorry! I was trying to fix it, I swear! :)

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j_s_cavalcante August 29 2008, 08:38:35 UTC
*flails*

*melts from the hotness*

(This is outstanding, Arrow. Also, GUH...you kind of killed me with that last scene, there!)

*goes on to Part 2*

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arrow00 August 29 2008, 17:46:43 UTC
Thanks, missy. I kind of love f-ed up sex scenes.

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jule1122 August 29 2008, 13:38:06 UTC
After Victoria-after she came in the night and did her worst one last time before dying-Ray stopped entering Fraser's space. And Fraser understood why-really, who could blame Ray for being tentative, for avoiding touching him, when Fraser himself was uncertain whether he would welcome it, whether he deserved it. He was a changed man, damaged in both their eyes. Perhaps even as much as when he was nearly paralyzed by a misplaced bullet.

That has to be one of the saddest things I've ever read. i hate that Fraser feels that way. Thank God he has Ray. And my heart just breaks watching Fraser struggle to reach out and accept Ray's feelings for him and knowing ray must want to give him so much more. It's just beautiful at the same time.

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arrow00 August 29 2008, 17:47:18 UTC
Thanks so much, Jules. Thank God he has Ray, indeed. :)

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meresy August 29 2008, 17:33:46 UTC


I'm trying not to get all wibbly, reading this at work, but *wibbles*.

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arrow00 August 29 2008, 17:47:54 UTC
hee. that happened to me just yesterday. :)

::♥ you betta.::

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