Fanfiction : Bleach - Lift Your Face

[arrankaara]

Title: Lift Your Face.
Type: Fanfiction : Bleach.
Disclaimer: I don’t own any of the characters mentioned in this fanfic. They belong to Kubo Tite, the amazing man that had created Bleach.
Rating: PG15. I think. XDD I suck at rating things.
Word Count: 827 words.
Summary: Wabisuke and Kira have a midnight conversation. Mentions of Gin and Shinsou.

Comments

[evil_gummiworm]

OMIGAWD. *dies SO HARD* Wabisuke is craaazy~! How perfect~ I really loved the - the Kira, and the Shinsou, and - and - YAY. What a wonderful way to start my morning <3 GOOD JOB! *worships*

[arrankaara]

Yay, someone like the crack it~! I'm so relieved. I thought I've botched up the whole thing.

Thank you for your comment! *hearts*

[dana_fields]

I LOVED Wabisuke. So weird..! But in a great way.

It was very original, very awesome. And you can never have enough zanpakuto fics.

(Or Kira fics, because I love Kira too.)

[arrankaara]

I loved Wabisuke too! S/He/It (because I truly don't know Wabi's gender >____<) should get more screen time.

A fellow Kira-luver! *stalks*

[dana_fields]

I think Wabisuke should be a 'he', but that's just because -suke is usually in a boy's name. ^^'

(The world needs more Kira-love!)

[arrankaara]

It'll definitely be prettier if Wabisuke is a man-zanpakutou (you have no idea how I cracked up at that... like, man-whore or something. Kinda like '-suke' in 'Sanosuke' eh? (just because I noticed Seta in your icon >___<)

And you're definitely right there. Wish there are more Kira writers out there. I'd whore myself to get more Kira-lovin'.

♥

[flo_nelja]

Oh. Wow.
Your Wabisuke is incredible. The progressive physical description is... very evocative, and his psychology goes well with Kira, and the interaction is so weird, so sad... I loved it a lot ! The only thing is that I think zanpakutous should knos a little more in detail their master's thoughts... don't they ?
Or maybe Kira's pain for the loss of Gin is so strong that Wabisuke cannot even feel that Gin hurt him...
I really loved this a lot !!

[arrankaara]

Thank you. Your comment makes my day. ^____^

I think that zanpakutos don't necessarily know what its master's thoughts. Because as I remembered, Zabimaru questioned Renji when the redhead lost to Ichigo (prior to him fighting Byakuya). So, I'm taking that approach. I might be wrong but... *shrugs*

[flo_nelja]

Yeah, you're right. They can't read thoughts, only sense the global spirit. But they can see the external world - since at the same time, Zabimaru was talking about Zangetsu, he lost track of it only because he was defeated. Or do they see the world only when they are released ?
I really don't know.

...
If Kira's inner world works by the same rules than Ichigo's world, there must be a lot of rain in it...

[arrankaara]

Yeah, well someone should make a study about the limits of zanpakutous, whether they're actually capable of seeing and feeling the material world through their masters. It's such an intricate thing, I suppose.

Thinking about Kira's inner world makes me kind of depressed... Poor precious Kira-kun... *mopes*

[pouf]

...wow. I love your characterization of Wabisuke.

[arrankaara]

I'm glad you do. XD

[148km]

Oh, ahh, just ahhh! :O ♥ Something about what I just read up there is amazing, and I think it's Wabisuke! Lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely!

[arrankaara]

*bags* I just love the word 'lovely'~ And thank you for your comment!