Fanfiction : Bleach Drabbles (#3-4)

[arrankaara]

Title: Beautiful.
Type: Fanfiction : Bleach.
Prompt: Themes taken from sanbantaichou. #3 Cuffed; caged.
Disclaimer: I don't own Bleach. Kubo Tite does, and some other people that I don't know.
Rating: PG13.
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Summary: An Ichimaru-centric drabble. Gin reflects on the state of his vice-captain. [ GinKira ]. Drabble-esque.
Author's Note: Need to start

Comments

<-- stalker

[amaka_chao]

i love your writing. and i love Ichimaru-sama. So when I saw this on my friends page I did a happy lil computer chair dance. XD

I agree with the repressed Byakuya view.

one thing ^_^
Byakuya calls Ichimaru "Ichimaru-taichou" with the taichou stressed.
Ichimaru calls Byakuya "Byakuya-taichou" with the taichou stressed as well. I would think that if Ichimaru was trying to be disrespectful the "Byakuya" would be stressed and not the "taichou". Byakuya is his first name, Kuchiki is his last so maybe if you didn't want Ichimaru-sama to be disrespectful then it would be "Kuchiki-taichou". However if you did want him to be disrespctful then "Byakuya-taicho" is correct, but the stress would go on "Byakuya".................

I'm sorry its 3am, I confuse myself XD. I'm nitpicking an otherwise drool worthy drabble. I heart very much

...goes back to the stalker shadows...

Re: <-- stalker

[arrankaara]

Aha! I've got a stalker! *stalks back*

About the emphasis, I was actually aiming for Gin to be annoying. Because Bya had emphasized the word 'taichou' to remind Gin of his duties (which does not include sneaking up to and/or harassing other captains... XDDD), Gin just sort of mimicked Bya back.

I know from experience that that is mighty annoying.

I'm glad you liked my fic enough to comment on it. Thank you~!!