I'm not gonna lie, the first one confuses me. I have no idea what's going on, besides D and G staring at each other.
The second one, though. Goddamnit, Lily, choose Severus! Stupid woman! Should it be love, or should it be duty? Idiot child! Love and duty? That is no choice.
I love that I got so wrapped up in her thoughts, it felt so real.
Yes, I will, bb. But a request of yours means quite a long attention span and lots of focus, for I do not want to write something hastily and without substance; these drabbles are written in a couple of minutes, for a contest I'm being in for the fun of it. Your requests are a matter of pride. You shall have them.
Tee hee, the first one is meant to imply that Draco has actually been infatuated with Ginny for a long while, and as the challenge asked for the thoughts of a character present in the epilogue, that was the best thing I could come up with at that moment.
I'm so happy you like the second one! You know how much I care about Lily, and how Lily/Severus is my favourite HP ship; hence, I've tried to capture her emotions at that particular moment, and it makes me giddy with joy to know that you think I accomplished the task well.
Excuses! Unacceptable! *smirk* How many months has it been? (I like teasing you a little too much, I think.)
Ah. I see. I hated that damn epilogue.
Yeah you did, and beautifully. Her emotions are very strong in your passages, but it's the imagery that gets to me: the bit about beams tangled in her hair? Pure poetry. I cannot believe English isn't your first language. Honestly, I'm envious.
RE : Pure poetry. -> You're making me blush and tremble in pleasure at the same time; coming from you, it's a compliment that truly makes my day! The problem is, I should be working more to improve my storytelling. My style is fine, and lyrical, and catchy, but the thing is I can still not properly hold on a plot, or follow a nice storyline. Nobody's perfect :p.
I personally think there's no epilogue; but this was the request, so ah.
Tease me as you please, you're not getting anything of low quality from me, alright?
PS: The Hero and the Crown is love! Halfway through it, noting down ironic bits like crazy and laughing at late hours in the night; also, Aerin and Tor must have babies nao are really annoying me with their damn sexual tension!
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I'm not gonna lie, the first one confuses me. I have no idea what's going on, besides D and G staring at each other.
The second one, though. Goddamnit, Lily, choose Severus! Stupid woman! Should it be love, or should it be duty? Idiot child! Love and duty? That is no choice.
I love that I got so wrapped up in her thoughts, it felt so real.
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Tee hee, the first one is meant to imply that Draco has actually been infatuated with Ginny for a long while, and as the challenge asked for the thoughts of a character present in the epilogue, that was the best thing I could come up with at that moment.
I'm so happy you like the second one! You know how much I care about Lily, and how Lily/Severus is my favourite HP ship; hence, I've tried to capture her emotions at that particular moment, and it makes me giddy with joy to know that you think I accomplished the task well.
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Ah. I see. I hated that damn epilogue.
Yeah you did, and beautifully. Her emotions are very strong in your passages, but it's the imagery that gets to me: the bit about beams tangled in her hair? Pure poetry. I cannot believe English isn't your first language. Honestly, I'm envious.
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I personally think there's no epilogue; but this was the request, so ah.
Tease me as you please, you're not getting anything of low quality from me, alright?
PS: The Hero and the Crown is love! Halfway through it, noting down ironic bits like crazy and laughing at late hours in the night; also, Aerin and Tor must have babies nao are really annoying me with their damn sexual tension!
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That's just pure ♥, really!
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