Doctor Who: The Clean-Up

Sep 19, 2011 01:23

Title: The Clean-Up
Author: arliddian
Rating: PG
Fandom: Doctor Who
Characters/Pairing: Amy/Rory
Summary: Rory has grown used to cleaning up messes. It's simply a part of his life with Amy.
Word Count: 718
Author's Note: Prompt - Messes. The ending of The God Complex was incredibly bittersweet and beautiful, and inspired me to write this little one-shot.
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pairing: amy/rory, prompts, char: dw: rory, fandom: doctor who, char: dw: amy

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dash_of_nutmeg September 18 2011, 15:33:34 UTC
Wow. This is beautiful and heartbreaking. You did an excellent job, and you wrote the characters perfectly.

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arliddian September 18 2011, 15:41:28 UTC
Thank you so much. I often worry about characterisation, so I'm very glad you thought I did a good job with this. Thanks for your kind words. =)

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hanelissar September 18 2011, 17:34:28 UTC
Aw this is lovely, sad and sweet and very Rory!

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arliddian September 19 2011, 02:09:01 UTC
Thank you!! I'm so glad that you think so! =D

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sea_thoughts September 19 2011, 19:54:09 UTC
This is so Rory. He's always there, standing by, such a beautiful expression of love.

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arliddian September 20 2011, 00:37:12 UTC
And that's why we love him. =) Thank you, I'm glad you thought this was true to his character.

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lady_with_cats September 20 2011, 04:32:22 UTC
All my creys. All of them. ;________;

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arliddian September 20 2011, 04:59:05 UTC
Awwww. *Hands you a tissue* Thanks for reading! <3

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hazy_crazy September 20 2011, 10:43:38 UTC
I agree with sea_thoughts. You've captured Rory's silent yet strong nature extremely well in this fic, and the fact that he is always there for Amy to fall back on. *sigh* I heart him :D He's Amy's rock, that is for sure. You write them wonderfully. This was rather bittersweet, a bit of a contrast from the other post-The God Complex fic, and I like that :) One where Amy can accept and move on, the other where she just cannot forget. I could imagine both being canon.

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arliddian September 20 2011, 10:45:51 UTC
Thank you, Jess. =) I'm so glad you think I've captured him well - I'm always nervous about characterisation so it means a lot to me that you think he rings true. He really is her rock!

I imagine that it would be hard for her to move on, at least at first, and then as the days wear on I think it would probably get easier. So yeah, like you I could imagine both ways being canon!

Thanks for commenting on all of these, Jess! I really appreciate it! <3

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hazy_crazy September 20 2011, 10:48:17 UTC
You're welcome :) And yes, I'm nervous about characterisation too!! It's such a relief when others assure you that you're doing ok :D

It's not a problem, I've always loved your fanfic and I love Amy/Rory, so it's a perfect fit hehe ;)

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