Title: Simple pleasure
Rating: NC-17
Genre: smut, pwp, whatever you want to call it
Pairing: Sam/Gabriel
Spoilers: none
Warnings: bondage
I've written this a while ago, but haven't got around to actually posting it. And I'd like to point out that I've written it mainly because
krystalicekitsu 's
disclaimer is awesome.
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Enjoy... )
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I'd send some, but I'm afraid it would melt before it arrived. :)
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This was so hot, and also, I loved super needy impatient!sam and playful Gabriel. And the end is cute.
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I'm glad my first pwp worked so well! But then again, I had researched thoroughly before... :)
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Hold-down blowjobs are 'Ngh.' And- *flails at Gabe snapping them from a bathroom to a porn den* That's so f-ing Gabriel.
And- 'Gabriel agrees and nuzzles into his chin.' *melts*
I think your quotations kind of blew up on you. They keep starting with a comma instead of a quotation mark, and the last quotation mark is turned out instead of in.
Also- prostrate=/=prostate. I think you want the later.
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And, yeah. Quotation marks. I thought about changing them, because I remembered our English teacher telling us they are written differently in English, but I decided I was too lazy to change them all back... I'm going to do that now.
Thanks for pointing all that stuff out!(And how do you do the 'tiny letters' thing?)
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English isn't your first language?! Seriously?!! Holy crap, I think you might be better than some of the native speakers!
Np! (just go '< sub >' and '< / sub >' around your text, but remove the spaces first.)
Thanks again for the story!
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